Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Use present tense consistently and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I usually go to the library to borrow books because I love reading and it's free."

例: I usually go to the library to borrow books because I love reading, and it's a free resource for me.

提案: Try to answer directly and clearly. Use present simple tense and avoid awkward phrasing. For example, "I usually borrow books from the library and read them at home or elsewhere."

例: I usually borrow books from the library and read them at home or in other comfortable places.

提案: Your answer is good but could be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. For example, "I preferred studying in my room because it was more comfortable, so I didn't go to the library often as a kid. However, I think the library is good for consistent studying."

例: I preferred studying in my room because it was more comfortable, so I didn't visit the library often as a child. However, I believe the library is a great place for consistent study.

提案: Your answer has good content but needs better grammar and linking words. For example, "Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because many enjoy studying there. Especially grade 12 students, who prepare for local exams and need to study consistently, find libraries to be the best option."

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because many enjoy studying there. Especially grade 12 students, who are preparing for local exams, find libraries to be the best place to study consistently.

× Yes, I usually went to the library for borrowing books to home because I love reading and I need books and libraries the best option for this because the books are free.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library to borrow books to take home because I love reading and I need books, and libraries are the best option for this because the books are free.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'went' with the adverb 'usually', which indicates a habitual action. Habitual actions should be expressed in the present tense. Also, 'for borrowing books to home' is awkward; 'to borrow books to take home' is clearer. Additionally, 'libraries the best option' lacks a verb; 'libraries are the best option' is correct.

× I'm not spending my time in the library, but I borrow books, so I spend time with books in my home or another place that I brought the book.

✓ I don't spend my time in the library, but I borrow books, so I spend time with books at my home or another place where I brought the book.

The phrase 'I'm not spending my time' is awkward for habitual actions; 'I don't spend my time' is more appropriate. Also, 'in my home' should be 'at my home' to indicate location. 'Another place that I brought the book' is incorrect; it should be 'another place where I brought the book' to correctly use the relative pronoun.

× I prefer to study in my room because it's more comfortable than studying in library, so I didn't go to library that much when I was a kid, but library is actually good for studying consistently.

✓ I prefer to study in my room because it's more comfortable than studying in the library, so I didn't go to the library that much when I was a kid, but the library is actually good for studying consistently.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× Yes, they often go to the library in my country because everyone enjoy to study in the library, especially the grade 12 students because they are preparing to exam the local exam and they need to study consistently.

✓ Yes, they often go to the library in my country because everyone enjoys studying in the library, especially the grade 12 students because they are preparing for the local exam and they need to study consistently.

The verb 'enjoy' should be in third person singular form 'enjoys' to agree with 'everyone'. Also, 'enjoy to study' is incorrect; the correct form is 'enjoy studying'. The phrase 'preparing to exam the local exam' is incorrect; it should be 'preparing for the local exam'.

× So libraries are best options.

✓ So libraries are the best options.

The phrase 'best options' requires the definite article 'the' to specify that these are the best among options. Without 'the', the sentence is incomplete.