Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural by correcting minor grammatical errors and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of 'get the actual physical books', you could say 'borrow physical books'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I don't often go to the library nowadays because I usually buy books online and read them on my iPad. This is much more convenient than borrowing physical books from the library.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and provide specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, explain what 'it has all the...' refers to. Also, avoid repetition by combining similar ideas.

例: When I go to the library, I usually study in the South study room because it is spacious and quiet. Moreover, it has all the resources I need, such as reference books and free Wi-Fi.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and correct grammar. For example, say 'children's literature' instead of 'childhood literature' and 'interesting magazines for children' instead of 'interesting magazine for child'. Also, try to add linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I always went to the library when I was young because my grandparents often took me there. They liked it since the library had many comics, children's literature, and interesting magazines for kids.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and could be more concise. For example, say 'the kids I know don't often go to the library' instead of 'are not often go'. Also, use linking words to contrast ideas clearly.

例: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but the ones I know don't often go to the library nowadays because they prefer spending time scrolling on their phones or playing video games instead.

× I think it's more convenient than going to the library and get the actual physical books.

✓ I think it's more convenient than going to the library and getting the actual physical books.

After the phrase 'than going to the library', the verb should be in the '-ing' form to maintain parallel structure. Using 'get' is incorrect because it breaks the parallelism with 'going'. Therefore, 'getting' is the correct form.

× When I go to the library, usually I study in the South study room because there is a big self study room in the Public Library in my city and I like to study there because it's quiet and it has all the.

✓ When I go to the library, I usually study in the South study room because there is a big self-study room in the Public Library in my city and I like to study there because it's quiet and it has everything.

The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the main verb 'study' for correct word order. Also, 'self study room' should be hyphenated as 'self-study room' as it is a compound adjective. The sentence was incomplete; 'it has all the' is corrected to 'it has everything' to complete the thought.

× My grandparents always brought me to the Public Library because there were many comics and childhood literature and some interesting magazine for child.

✓ My grandparents always brought me to the Public Library because there were many comics and childhood literature and some interesting magazines for children.

'Magazine' should be plural 'magazines' to agree with 'many comics' and 'some'. Also, 'child' should be plural 'children' to correctly refer to the audience of the magazines. This corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× I'm not quite sure about it, but the kids that I know are not often go to the library now because they are more likely to spend time on scrolling on their phones or iPads or playing video games instead.

✓ I'm not quite sure about it, but the kids that I know do not often go to the library now because they are more likely to spend time scrolling on their phones or iPads or playing video games instead.

The phrase 'are not often go' is incorrect; the correct auxiliary verb for negation with 'go' is 'do not'. Also, 'spend time on scrolling' should be 'spend time scrolling' because 'spend time' is followed directly by the '-ing' form without a preposition. This corrects verb usage and preposition errors.