Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'go to there'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: No, I rarely go to the library because I usually use digital devices like smartphones and computers for studying. I only visit the library when I need to browse physical books.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp như 'it's provide' nên là 'it provides'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú.

例: I usually go to the library because it provides a quiet environment where I can focus on studying. I like reading textbooks and other study materials there. However, sometimes I prefer studying at home because it is more comfortable and convenient.

提案: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp như 'close my home' nên là 'close to my home'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm một câu chủ đề mở đầu rõ ràng.

例: When I was a kid, I rarely went to the library because there were very few libraries in my hometown. The only one was far away in the city center, so it was inconvenient to visit regularly. I always wished there was a library close to my home.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'this elaborate in person'. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể.

例: I think fewer Chinese kids go to the library nowadays because technology has developed rapidly. Most children prefer using ebooks or smartphones to access information, which is more convenient for learning.

× No, I rarely go to there because we have some new device or tool for educational such as smartphone, computer or ebooks.

✓ No, I rarely go there because we have some new devices or tools for education such as smartphones, computers, or ebooks.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'there' in this context. Also, 'device' and 'tool' should be plural to match 'some', and 'educational' should be changed to the noun 'education' to correctly describe the purpose of the devices.

× No, I rarely go to there because we have some new device or tool for educational such as smartphone, computer or ebooks.

✓ No, I rarely go there because we have some new devices or tools for education such as smartphones, computers, or ebooks.

Using 'some' requires plural nouns when referring to countable items, so 'device' and 'tool' should be plural. Also, 'smartphone', 'computer', and 'ebooks' should be plural to match the context.

× So go to the library if not necessary.

✓ So I don't go to the library if it's not necessary.

The original sentence lacks a subject and auxiliary verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I don't' and 'it's' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× And I just went to this when I went to browse books.

✓ And I just went there when I went to browse books.

The phrase 'went to this' is incorrect; 'there' is the correct adverb to indicate a place previously mentioned.

× I usually go to the library because it's provide a quiet environment where I can focus on studying.

✓ I usually go to the library because it provides a quiet environment where I can focus on studying.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'provides' in third person singular form to agree in number.

× I like to use study book to read books or textbook and gain new knowledge.

✓ I like to use study books to read books or textbooks and gain new knowledge.

'Study book' and 'textbook' should be plural ('study books' and 'textbooks') to match the general statement and plural 'books'.

× Honestly, in my hometown there weren't many libraries.

✓ Honestly, in my hometown there were not many libraries.

Contraction 'weren't' is acceptable but 'were not' is more formal; however, this is stylistic. No grammatical error here, so no correction needed.

× When it was the case, I always wished there was a library close my home.

✓ When that was the case, I always wished there was a library close to my home.

The phrase 'close my home' is missing the preposition 'to' after 'close' to indicate proximity.

× This makes it easier and more convenient for them to learn without having to be this elaborate in person.

✓ This makes it easier and more convenient for them to learn without having to be this elaborate in person.

The phrase 'to be this elaborate in person' is unclear and awkward. Possibly intended meaning is 'without having to be physically present' or 'without having to go there in person.' However, since it does not match any listed grammar problem types, no correction is made here.