Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition such as 'I, I'. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly. Use linking words to connect reasons clearly.

例: I usually go to the library three to four times a week because it helps me focus and complete my homework efficiently.

提案: Improve sentence structure and grammar, and avoid repetition like 'do it do it'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about what you do and why the environment helps you.

例: I usually do my homework and review school materials in the library because it is very quiet and free from distractions, which helps me concentrate better.

提案: Use past tense correctly and avoid repetition like 'I I'. Clarify your ideas and use linking words to explain why you liked the library as a child.

例: I always went to the library when I was a kid because I liked the quiet atmosphere, which helped me improve my learning every time.

提案: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to contrast ideas clearly. Also, complete your thoughts to make your answer coherent and natural.

例: I think most Chinese kids go to the library every day to prepare for their lessons, but some children have never been to the library due to lack of access or interest.

× Mostly when I spend my time to the library is do my homework and review my school materials because delivery is very quiet and without distractions so I can do it do it comfortable.

✓ Mostly when I spend my time in the library, I do my homework and review my school materials because the delivery is very quiet and without distractions so I can do it comfortably.

The phrase 'spend my time to the library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' for spending time at a place. Also, 'do it do it comfortable' is incorrect; 'comfortable' is an adjective, but here an adverb 'comfortably' is needed to describe how the action is done. The sentence also lacks proper structure and articles.

× Mostly when I spend my time to the library is do my homework and review my school materials because delivery is very quiet and without distractions so I can do it do it comfortable.

✓ Mostly when I spend my time in the library, I do my homework and review my school materials because the delivery is very quiet and without distractions so I can do it comfortably.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'spend my time'; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to spending time at a location.

× Mostly when I spend my time to the library is do my homework and review my school materials because delivery is very quiet and without distractions so I can do it do it comfortable.

✓ Mostly when I spend my time in the library, I do my homework and review my school materials because the delivery is very quiet and without distractions so I can do it comfortably.

The word 'comfortable' is an adjective, but here it should be an adverb 'comfortably' to correctly modify the verb 'do'.

× I always go to the library since I was kid because I I like the atmosphere that has been very quiet and I need that the results that can help me to improve myself every time.

✓ I have always gone to the library since I was a kid because I like the atmosphere that has always been very quiet and I need the results that can help me improve myself every time.

The phrase 'since I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'. Also, 'I always go' should be in present perfect 'I have always gone' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I always go to the library since I was kid because I I like the atmosphere that has been very quiet and I need that the results that can help me to improve myself every time.

✓ I have always gone to the library since I was a kid because I like the atmosphere that has always been very quiet and I need the results that can help me improve myself every time.

The use of 'always go' with 'since' is incorrect; present perfect tense 'have always gone' is needed to express an action that started in the past and continues to the present.

× I always go to the library since I was kid because I I like the atmosphere that has been very quiet and I need that the results that can help me to improve myself every time.

✓ I have always gone to the library since I was a kid because I like the atmosphere that has always been very quiet and I need the results that can help me improve myself every time.

The phrase 'help me to improve' is acceptable but 'help me improve' is more natural and concise in English.

× I think mostly Chinese kids often go to the library, uh, always go to library every day because they have to prepare their lesson from school.

✓ I think most Chinese kids often go to the library, uh, always go to the library every day because they have to prepare their lessons from school.

'Mostly' should be 'most' to correctly refer to the majority. 'Lesson' should be plural 'lessons' because students prepare multiple lessons. Also, 'go to library' is missing the article 'the' before 'library'.

× I think mostly Chinese kids often go to the library, uh, always go to library every day because they have to prepare their lesson from school.

✓ I think most Chinese kids often go to the library, uh, always go to the library every day because they have to prepare their lessons from school.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, 'library' as a specific place requires 'the'.