Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用完整句子并避免口语缩写，同时注意句子结构的完整性。可以适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: No, I don't often go to the library because nowadays there are many digital books available on mobile phones. Therefore, if I want to read a book, I prefer to go online or use an online library to find interesting books.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，建议使用完整句子并减少口语化表达，同时可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually go to the library to do my assignments because I prefer to stay in a quiet environment when I need to concentrate. Therefore, the library is a suitable place for me.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子表达清楚观点，避免口语填充词，并且补充具体细节使内容丰富。

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid. Instead, I often went to the park or amusement parks with my family and friends because I was not interested in reading books at that time.

提案: 回答表达混乱且语法错误严重，建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并提供具体原因或例子，避免重复和口语化表达。

例: No, Chinese kids do not often go to the library. Many of them prefer to play games or sports in playgrounds with their friends or families because they find libraries boring.

× No 'cause nowadays so many digital books in our mobile phone, so if I wanna read some book I prefer go online or go website or online library to find some interesting books and read it.

✓ No, because nowadays there are so many digital books on our mobile phones, so if I want to read some books, I prefer to go online or visit websites or online libraries to find some interesting books and read them.

这里“digital books”是复数，应该用复数形式“books”，并且“mobile phone”应为复数“mobile phones”，因为通常指的是大家的手机。

× No 'cause nowadays so many digital books in our mobile phone, so if I wanna read some book I prefer go online or go website or online library to find some interesting books and read it.

✓ No, because nowadays there are so many digital books on our mobile phones, so if I want to read some books, I prefer to go online or visit websites or online libraries to find some interesting books and read them.

动词“prefer”后面应接动词不定式“to go”或动名词形式，这里应使用“to go”或“visiting”，而不是直接用动词原形“go”。

× No 'cause nowadays so many digital books in our mobile phone, so if I wanna read some book I prefer go online or go website or online library to find some interesting books and read it.

✓ No, because nowadays there are so many digital books on our mobile phones, so if I want to read some books, I prefer to go online or visit websites or online libraries to find some interesting books and read them.

介词“in”用于“mobile phone”不合适，应该用“on”表示“在手机上”。

× I prefer go to the library to do my assignment 'cause I prefer to stay a quiet environment when I concentrate on something.

✓ I prefer to go to the library to do my assignments because I prefer to stay in a quiet environment when I concentrate on something.

“assignment”应为复数形式“assignments”，因为通常指多项作业。

× I prefer go to the library to do my assignment 'cause I prefer to stay a quiet environment when I concentrate on something.

✓ I prefer to go to the library to do my assignments because I prefer to stay in a quiet environment when I concentrate on something.

“stay”后面应接介词“in”表示“处于某种环境中”，而不是直接接名词。

× No 'cause when I was a kid, I always go to the park or, uh, entertainment park with my families or friends because the kid is not interested in the boring book.

✓ No, because when I was a kid, I always went to the park or entertainment park with my family or friends because kids were not interested in boring books.

描述过去习惯动作时，动词应使用过去式“went”。

× No 'cause when I was a kid, I always go to the park or, uh, entertainment park with my families or friends because the kid is not interested in the boring book.

✓ No, because when I was a kid, I always went to the park or entertainment park with my family or friends because kids were not interested in boring books.

“families”应为单数“family”，表示家庭；“the kid”应改为复数“kids”，表示一般的孩子；“the boring book”应为复数“boring books”。

× No 'cause when I was a kid, I always go to the park or, uh, entertainment park with my families or friends because the kid is not interested in the boring book.

✓ No, because when I was a kid, I always went to the park or entertainment park with my family or friends because kids were not interested in boring books.

“is”用于单数第三人称，这里应改为复数“were”，因为主语是复数“kids”。

× He's prefer the.

✓ He prefers that.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词的正确形式和宾语，需补全句子。

× No kids in China, so many kids prefer to go to the playground to play the games or play the sports with your friends or families for the libraries.

✓ No, kids in China, many kids prefer to go to the playground to play games or play sports with their friends or family rather than go to the libraries.

“the games”应为复数“games”，且不需要定冠词；“the sports”应为复数“sports”，且不需要定冠词；“families”应为单数“family”；“your”应改为“their”。

× No kids in China, so many kids prefer to go to the playground to play the games or play the sports with your friends or families for the libraries.

✓ No, kids in China, many kids prefer to go to the playground to play games or play sports with their friends or family rather than go to the libraries.

代词“your”用于第二人称，这里应使用第三人称复数“their”。

× So boring. It's so boring things for.

✓ It's so boring.

句子结构不完整，需简化为完整句子“It's so boring.”。