Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
Umm, mostly I, I go libraries, umm, particularly when, uh, I need to, uh, take a glance, uh, of some informations, uh, which I wonder and umm, yeah, take so.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
Umm, actually, I don't prefer to go libraries because I have already, uh, some, uh, sources, uh, of information such as umm, ChatGPT, uh, AI, artificial science and umm, and it's uh, I usually prefer them more.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
Heard of her. I have only visited libraries, uh, a few times, uh, which, uh, with, with my, with father and he, uh, always told me, uh, where I, I have had to looking at, had to look at and umm, it was umm, perfectly.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
I, I wish I would answer this question and give you, uh, some kind of responses, but, uh, I, uh, I'm afraid, I guess I can't do this because I don't have any clue of Chinese kids about they are going to libraries or not. Umm. And yeah, that's all I want to say.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 40.0提案: Cevabınızda gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler çok fazla. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde ve maksimum 5 cümle ile sınırlayın.
例: Yes, I often go to the library, especially when I need to find information for my studies. I find it a quiet place to focus and access various books and resources.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 45.0提案: Cevabınızda konudan sapmalar ve gereksiz tekrarlar var. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve nedenlerinizi açık ve net ifade edin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.
例: Usually, I use the library to study and read books, but recently I prefer online sources like ChatGPT because they are more convenient and faster.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 35.0提案: Cümleniz anlaşılması zor ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha basit ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanarak doğrudan soruya yanıt verin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimeleri azaltın.
例: Yes, I visited the library a few times with my father when I was a child. He always guided me on which books to read, and I enjoyed those visits.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 50.0提案: Cevabınızda kendinizi ifade etmekte zorlanıyorsunuz ve dolgu kelimeler çok fazla. Eğer bilmiyorsanız, bunu kısa ve net bir şekilde ifade edin. Gereksiz tekrarları azaltın ve daha doğal cümleler kurun.
例: I'm not sure about that, but I think some Chinese kids do go to the library, especially those who enjoy reading and studying.
文法
× I go libraries
✓ I go to libraries
The phrase 'go libraries' is incorrect because the verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Also, 'libraries' is plural, which is acceptable here, but the missing preposition causes the error.
× some informations
✓ some information
'Information' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'informations'. The correct form is 'some information'.
× I don't prefer to go libraries
✓ I don't prefer to go to libraries
'Go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Also, 'libraries' is plural which is acceptable, but the missing 'to' causes the error.
× I have only visited libraries, uh, a few times
✓ I have only visited the library a few times
'Libraries' is plural, but the context suggests visiting a specific place, so 'the library' is more appropriate. Also, 'a few times' is correctly used here.
× I have had to looking at
✓ I have had to look at
'Have had to' is followed by the base form of the verb, not the present participle. Therefore, 'looking' should be corrected to 'look'.
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