Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and articles are important. Also avoid irrelevant fragments.

例: Yes, I often go to the school library. I usually visit there twice a week to borrow novels and study quietly, because reading is my favorite hobby.

提案: Use correct verb forms and clearer linking words. Begin with a topic sentence, then give specific activities and reasons, linking them (e.g., 'and', 'so', 'because'). Keep to 2–4 sentences maximum.

例: I usually study in the library and review my lecture notes because it is quiet and helps me concentrate. I also often read books on history and literature to broaden my knowledge.

提案: This answer is generally good but fix word choice and grammar. Replace 'play' with 'place' and use past tense consistently. Add one brief specific memory to enrich the answer.

例: Yes, I used to visit the local library every weekend when I was a child. It was my favourite place because I loved reading storybooks and often borrowed new ones on Saturdays.

提案: Admit uncertainty briefly, then offer a reasonable guess or general observation to extend the answer. Use clear phrasing and correct nouns. Avoid irrelevant personal nationality details unless explaining perspective.

例: I'm not sure how often Chinese children go to libraries, since I haven't lived in China. However, I imagine it varies by city and school: in larger cities more kids might visit school or public libraries regularly.

× I often go to library in my school because reading book is my favorite.

✓ I often go to the library at my school because reading books are my favorite.

The sentence has article and plural errors. 'library' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place (the library at my school). 'book' should be plural 'books' when speaking generally. Also 'at my school' is the natural prepositional phrase. Note: alternatively 'reading is my favorite' could be used if you want to treat reading as an activity rather than 'books' as plural objects.

× I in my favorite activity.

✓ Reading is my favorite activity.

The original sentence lacks a verb and proper subject placement. To express preference use the subject 'Reading' and the verb 'is' followed by the complement 'my favorite activity'. This fixes the sentence structure error.

× I usually studying in the library reviewing my lecture note because it's quiet and have me considered.

✓ I usually study in the library to review my lecture notes because it's quiet and helps me concentrate.

'usually studying' is incorrect because after adverb 'usually' use base form 'study' for habitual actions (present simple). 'reviewing my lecture note' should be 'to review my lecture notes' or 'review my lecture notes' for purpose and plural 'notes'. 'have me considered' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is 'helps me concentrate' so use 'helps me concentrate'. Also use present simple for habits.

× I also often read books on history and literature.

✓ I also often read books on history and literature.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'books' is correctly plural and 'often' placement is acceptable. No change needed.

× It was my favorite play because I love reading story book and borrowing new ones to take home.

✓ It was my favorite place because I loved reading storybooks and borrowing new ones to take home.

'play' is a word choice error; context requires 'place'. When speaking about childhood habits in the past, use past tense: 'loved' instead of 'love'. 'story book' should be one word or hyphenated 'storybooks' and plural to match 'reading' multiple books.

× I'm not sure about that because I'm Vietnamese so I don't have much in rec experience with how often Chinese touring youth libraries.

✓ I'm not sure about that because I'm Vietnamese, so I don't have much recent experience with how often Chinese children visit libraries.

Several issues: 'in rec' is incorrect — use 'recent'. 'touring youth libraries' is unnatural; use 'children visit libraries' or 'young people visit libraries'. Maintain present simple/continuous: 'I don't have much recent experience with how often Chinese children visit libraries' is clear and grammatical. Added a comma before 'so' for clarity.