Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more consistent with tenses and grammar, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to contrast periods. Also keep answer within 3-4 sentences and correct small errors (e.g., "a calm place to study and do exercises").

例: I go to the library depending on the time of year. When I have exams or I’m studying intensively, I visit the library often because it is a calm place to study and do exercises. However, during holidays or vacations I usually read at home instead.

提案: Give a concise topic sentence, use linking words to separate study activities and leisure reading, correct verb forms and collocations (e.g., "review my lessons," "solve exercises," "look at books related to my subjects"). Avoid filler phrases and incomplete sentences.

例: Usually I review my lessons and solve exercises in the library, especially books related to the subjects I am studying. If I go there for pleasure, I browse the shelves and read novels or magazines. Therefore, my activities depend on whether I am studying or relaxing.

提案: This answer is clear and personal—good. Improve by adding a linking word and a brief specific example to enrich the response (e.g., mention age or a book you read at home). Keep grammar consistent ("friends who liked reading").

例: No, I didn’t go to the library as a child. I usually read at home because I felt shy about going alone, and my friends didn’t like reading as much as I did. For example, I spent afternoons reading comic books and children’s stories in my bedroom.

提案: Avoid generalizations and vague language. Start with a clear stance, acknowledge limited knowledge, and provide a reason or example with cautious language (e.g., "I’m not an expert, but I think..."). Use neutral, respectful phrasing and better vocabulary (e.g., "studious" rather than "intelligent").

例: I’m not very familiar with Chinese culture, but I think many children in China visit libraries quite often because education is highly valued and schools encourage reading. For instance, some schools organize regular library visits or reading clubs.

× It actually depends on the period.

✓ It actually depends on the period.

No change needed; sentence is correct. It uses simple present to express a general truth or habitual condition, which is appropriate.

× If I'm on my study period I visited a lot since it's calm place to to study and solve exercise.

✓ If I'm in my study period I visit a lot since it's a calm place to study and solve exercises.

Multiple errors corrected but only those matching the allowed list are reported. Use simple present 'visit' (present tense issue) because the condition 'If I'm in my study period' implies a habitual action. Correct preposition 'in' (incorrect use of prepositions) for 'in my study period'. Add article 'a' before 'calm place' (article errors). Remove duplicate 'to'. Use plural 'exercises' (singular and plural issue). Suggestions: use present tense for habitual actions, check prepositions and articles, and pluralize countable nouns when appropriate.

× But on holidays or vacation I just read at home.

✓ But on holidays or during vacations I just read at home.

Use 'during vacations' or 'on vacation' consistently. 'On holidays' is acceptable in some varieties, but pairing 'vacation' requires 'during' or plural 'vacations'. This keeps tense simple present for habitual action.

× As I have mentioned before, if I'm on my study period, I take the opportunity to visit my lesson and solve some exercises and also take a look on books there that are related to the things I'm studying currently.

✓ As I mentioned before, if I'm in my study period, I take the opportunity to attend my lessons, solve some exercises, and also take a look at books that are related to the things I'm studying currently.

Use 'attend my lessons' instead of 'visit my lesson' (word choice; treated as present tense correction). Use preposition 'in' for 'in my study period' (incorrect use of prepositions). Use 'take a look at' (incorrect use of prepositions). Change 'lesson' to plural 'lessons' (singular and plural issue). Maintain simple present for habitual actions. Suggestions: use correct verbs for attending classes, check prepositions 'at' vs 'on', and pluralize when referring to repeated items.

× But like if I'm visited for fun, I'm just gonna pick any books and read it.

✓ But if I visit it for fun, I just pick any book and read it.

Original mixes incorrect verb forms and colloquial future 'gonna'. Use simple present 'visit' for habitual or potential action (present tense), and 'pick' and 'read' in present. Change 'books' to 'book' to agree with singular 'any' noun used with 'read it'. Avoid 'gonna' in formal speech. Suggestions: use consistent tense, avoid informal contractions, match pronouns and noun number.

× I because I.

✓ I don't know why; I just enjoy reading.

Original fragment 'I because I.' lacks a verb and is ungrammatical (sentence without a verb/structure error). Provide a complete sentence that fits the context. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a subject and predicate and expresses a complete thought.

× Honestly, no.

✓ Honestly, no.

This short answer is acceptable and correctly uses present reference to past context; no change needed.

× I wasn't really familiar with the library.

✓ I wasn't really familiar with the library.

Sentence is correct: past simple appropriately describes past state.

× I used to spend my reading time at home, maybe because I was afraid to go there alone and I didn't have friends who like reading much, unlike me.

✓ I used to spend my reading time at home, maybe because I was afraid to go there alone and I didn't have friends who liked reading much, unlike me.

Change 'like' to past 'liked' to match 'used to' and past timeframe (verb tense agreement). Maintain past tense throughout the clause. Suggestion: match verb tenses when describing past situations.

× Honestly I'm not really familiar with the Chinese culture and how people think they're but I would say yes since the Chinese are known for being intelligent and their kids like to read and enjoy that so I would say like quite often.

✓ Honestly, I'm not really familiar with Chinese culture or how people think there, but I would say yes, since the Chinese are known for valuing education and their children often like to read, so I would say quite often.

Multiple issues: change 'the Chinese culture' to 'Chinese culture' (article errors), replace incorrect pronoun 'they're' with 'there' (incorrect use of pronouns/prepositions), 'kids' to 'children' for formality (word choice), adjust verb forms 'like' to 'often like' for clarity. Suggestions: avoid contractions and colloquial fillers like 'like', ensure correct pronouns 'there' vs 'they're', and keep consistent formality.