Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use articles and plural forms), and give one brief reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition.

例: No, I don’t often go to the library because I live in a small town and there isn’t a public library nearby. However, I sometimes borrow books online or visit a library when I travel to the city.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence about activities and follow with specific examples. Use coherent linking words (for example, because or such as) and correct tense and word choice.

例: At the library I usually read and study. For example, when I had access at school I borrowed novels and reference articles to prepare for exams, and I also used quiet study areas to finish homework.

提案: Answer directly, use correct verb forms and explain briefly with a supporting detail. Use a linking word like 'so' or 'because' appropriately and keep it natural.

例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a child because my school had one on campus. I enjoyed reading storybooks there, especially picture books and short tales before class.

提案: Avoid unclear or irrelevant words. If unsure about facts, give a cautious opinion and support it with a reason or example. Use clear language and simple linking words like 'probably' or 'often because'.

例: I think many Chinese children do visit libraries, especially those in cities, because schools and community centres encourage reading. In rural areas children may visit less often due to fewer facilities.

× Actually no, I do not go libraries because I live in a small town so there there are no library available.

✓ Actually no, I do not go to libraries because I live in a small town, so there are no libraries available.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' after 'go' and incorrect singular/plural forms. 'Go' is followed by 'to' when indicating a place. 'Library' should be plural 'libraries' to match 'no' and the general sense, or 'a library' for singular. Also remove the duplicated 'there'. Suggestion: use 'go to libraries' or 'go to the library' and ensure number agreement between determiner and noun; keep sentence punctuation to separate clauses.

× I want the dad.

✓ I meant that, dad.

This sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely intention was to correct or clarify a previous idea using past tense 'meant' or 'I meant that, Dad.' The error falls into sentence structure and verb choice issues. Suggestion: choose a clear verb ('mean' in past 'meant' if referring to previous intent) and address the listener appropriately.

× In my school days my school provided library so.

✓ In my school days, my school had a library.

Problems: awkward structure and missing article. Use 'had a library' to indicate existence in the past. 'Provided library' is incorrect; 'provide' requires an object like 'provided us with a library' but simpler is 'had a library.' Suggestion: use concise past form 'had' and include article 'a.'

× I dreamed some books, they're mostly I prefer to read novels, articles and many more.

✓ I read books; mostly I prefer novels, articles, and many other kinds of reading materials.

Errors: 'dreamed some books' is incorrect—probably intended 'read' not 'dreamed.' 'They're mostly I prefer to read' is ungrammatical word order. Suggestion: use the simple present 'I read' or 'I used to read' depending on context, place the preference phrase after a semicolon or period, and use 'many other kinds of reading materials' for clarity.

× Yes, I opened library when I was a kid, so I'd like to read storybooks over there.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid, so I liked to read storybooks there.

Errors: 'opened library' is wrong verb—one 'opens' a library, but a visitor 'went to' or 'visited' the library. Tense inconsistency: use past tense 'liked' to match 'was a kid.' Also 'over there' is informal; 'there' is sufficient. Suggestion: use 'went to the library' and keep past tense consistent.

× Yes, many of designers could go to live 30 day.

✓ Yes, many children can go to the library for 30 days.

This sentence has multiple errors: 'designers' is wrong noun for 'kids,' 'could go to live 30 day' is ungrammatical. Likely meaning: 'many children can visit the library for 30 days' or 'go to live' is incorrect. Corrected to 'many children can go to the library for 30 days.' Ensure correct noun ('children'), modal verb 'can' for general truth, preposition 'to the library,' and plural 'days.' Suggestion: choose accurate vocabulary and correct modal/tense and pluralization.