Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, use correct vocabulary, and make sentences clear and concise (max 5 sentences). Begin with a topic sentence saying how often you go, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Correct word choice ("library" not "slippery") and grammar (verb forms, articles, plural/singular) will improve your score.

例: I usually go to the library during exam weeks because I need a quiet place to concentrate. For example, at home my mother, brother and sister often talk, so I find it hard to study. Therefore, I prefer the calm atmosphere of the library.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use linking words to add a specific detail (what you study and how you study). Use correct verb forms and articles.

例: I usually study in the library, especially for exams. For instance, I review lecture notes and practice past papers there because the environment helps me focus.

提案: Answer in past tense and keep sentences natural and concise. Start with a topic sentence (yes/no or a short statement), then give a reason using linking word(s). Correct tense, subject-verb agreement and articles are needed.

例: No, I did not like going to the library when I was a child because it was too quiet. Also, I was a noisy child and preferred active places where I could play.

提案: Avoid broad stereotypes and be cautious when generalizing about a nationality. Start with a clear opinion phrase and support it with a specific, balanced reason. Use grammatically correct structures and linking words (e.g., "However," "For example").

例: I'm not sure about all Chinese children, but in my experience some do not visit libraries often because their parents prioritize extra tutoring at home. However, many children also use school or public libraries for studying and reading.

× I usually go to slippery during an extreme week because if I want to study in my own house there is my mom, there is my brother, sister and the house never been quiet and my sister never shuts her mouth down.

✓ I usually go to the library during a busy week because if I want to study at my house my mom and my brother and sister are there, and the house is never quiet; my sister never stops talking.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word choice ('slippery' should be 'library'), incorrect article use ('an extreme week' -> 'a busy week'), preposition errors ('in my own house' -> 'at my house'), verb tense and agreement errors ('house never been quiet' -> 'house is never quiet'), and informal/incorrect phrase ('never shuts her mouth down' -> 'never stops talking'). To improve, choose correct vocabulary, use appropriate articles and prepositions, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use natural idiomatic expressions. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Studying because I always go there for studying. My reason to go to library is always study for exam.

✓ I study there because I always go there to study. My reason for going to the library is always to study for exams.

Errors include awkward gerund/infinitive use and missing articles: 'for studying' is unnatural after 'go there' (use 'to study'), 'My reason to go to library' should be 'My reason for going to the library', and 'study for exam' needs article and plural ('study for exams' or 'an exam'). Use correct infinitive/gerund forms and include definite article before 'library'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× When I was a kid, I don't like to go to library because this place was a very quiet.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't like to go to the library because that place was very quiet.

Tense inconsistency: the sentence starts in past ('When I was a kid') but uses present 'don't like' instead of past 'didn't like'. Also missing article before 'library' and unnecessary article 'a' before 'very quiet'. Use past tense for habits in the past and include the definite article 'the library'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× There's a people wants to concentrate and I was a loud child, so this place don't fit me when I was a child.

✓ There are people who want to concentrate, and I was a loud child, so that place didn't suit me when I was a child.

'There's a people' is wrong: use plural 'There are people' and include relative pronoun 'who'. Present tense 'wants' should match plural subject 'people' as 'want'. 'Don't fit me' is incorrect past tense and verb choice: use 'didn't suit me'. Also 'this place' in past context should be 'that place'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent past tense. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I don't know because I'm not Chinese, but I think that Chinese kids not often go to the library. Probably their parents don't let them to go to library because everyone knows that Chinese parents are very strict.

✓ I don't know because I'm not Chinese, but I think that Chinese kids don't often go to the library. Probably their parents don't let them go to the library because everyone knows that Chinese parents are very strict.

Errors: use correct negative auxiliary 'don't' with subject 'Chinese kids' and place adverb 'often' correctly ('don't often go'). Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'let' ('let them go'). Include definite article before 'library'. Maintain present simple tense for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:4