Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct articles and plurals, and add one specific detail. Use linking words if adding extra info. For example, say how long you stay or what kinds of books you borrow.

例: Yes, I usually go to the library once a week. I often stay for about an hour and borrow novels and reference books for my studies.

提案: Make your answer clearer and coherent. Use a topic sentence describing main activities, then add specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., "usually," "then"). Correct verb forms and collocations ("look through books," "work quietly"). Keep it within 1–5 sentences.

例: In the library I usually browse through books and study quietly. I often take notes on my laptop, then borrow a few books to read at home.

提案: Improve grammar (past tense consistency), word order and clarity. Give a clear topic sentence about past habit, then add a specific example of what you did there. Avoid sentence fragments.

例: Yes, I often went to the school library when I was a child. I used to read storybooks and sometimes wrote short stories there.

提案: Be concise and avoid repetition. Begin with a direct answer about your knowledge, then offer a relevant comparison with clear reasons. Correct prepositions and plural forms, and remove duplicate words.

例: I'm not sure about China, but in Korea many children go to the library to do homework and read. Libraries there are popular study spaces after school.

× Yes, I usually go to library once a week.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library once a week.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'library'. Use 'the' when referring to a specific place that both speaker and listener understand. Suggestion: include 'the' before 'library'.

× And I borrow many book.

✓ And I borrow many books.

Countable noun 'book' must be plural when modified by 'many'. Use 'books' with 'many'. Suggestion: change 'book' to 'books' when using 'many'.

× I look many books and work walking surrounded by books and borrow them.

✓ I look at many books, walk among the shelves surrounded by books, and borrow some.

Several issues: verb 'look' needs the preposition 'at' when referring to examining books; 'work walking surrounded by books' is ungrammatical — 'walk among the shelves' or 'work surrounded by books' are correct; 'borrow them' is vaguely repetitive — 'borrow some' is more natural. Suggestions: use 'look at', separate actions with commas, choose either 'walk among the shelves' or 'work surrounded by books', and use 'some' instead of 'them' if indefinite.

× Yes, I usually went to school library when I was kid and I. Write book in there.

✓ Yes, I usually went to the school library when I was a kid, and I wrote books there.

Multiple errors: 'school library' needs 'the' (article error) and 'a kid' needs 'a'; 'Write' should be past tense 'wrote' to match 'went'; 'book' should be plural 'books' if it means more than one, or keep singular with article; 'in there' is unnatural — use 'there'. Suggestions: add articles 'the' and 'a', change 'Write' to 'wrote', and use 'there' at the end.

× I don't know, I'm not Chinese, but in Korea many kids go to library because they do homework in there and they read a book in their their.

✓ I don't know, I'm not Chinese, but in Korea many kids go to the library because they do their homework there and read books.

Problems: 'go to library' needs 'the' (article error); 'do homework in there' should be 'do their homework there' — use possessive pronoun 'their' before 'homework' and adverb 'there' for location; 'read a book in their their' is incorrect and duplicated 'their' and unclear: use 'read books' or 'read a book'. Suggestions: add 'the' before 'library', use 'their homework there', and simplify to 'read books'.

× Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

✓ Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

This sentence is already correct. 'the library' and 'a kid' are used appropriately. No change needed.