Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors, such as confusing 'suit' with 'shoes' and incomplete sentences. Try to answer directly and clearly, using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Keep your answer concise and relevant to the question.

例: I don't buy shoes very often because I find the process time-consuming. However, I believe shoes should be flexible and comfortable to wear.

提案: Your answer has vocabulary mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as 'the suit' instead of 'shoes'. Also, your sentences are not well connected. Try to use linking words and correct terms to make your answer clearer and more natural.

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but I usually prefer shopping in stores to ensure the shoes fit perfectly and are comfortable when I walk.

提案: Your answer is mostly clear and relevant, but there are minor grammar mistakes such as missing articles and verb forms. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, around 50 to 100 dollars per pair, because I prefer to invest in good quality shoes that are both comfortable and durable.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your preference clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'festival shoes' unless you explain them.

例: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable. It depends on the occasion; for example, when I meet my friends, I usually choose stylish shoes that are still comfortable to wear.

× I rarely buy the suit.

✓ I rarely buy suits.

The word 'suit' is singular, but the context suggests a general statement about buying shoes, so the plural form 'suits' is appropriate here.

× I think are buying the suit is quite time consuming and.

✓ I think buying suits is quite time consuming.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and an incomplete structure. Removing 'are' and the trailing 'and' creates a grammatically correct sentence.

× I think zoos can be a flexible and comfortable is necessary.

✓ I think shoes can be flexible and comfortable, which is necessary.

'Zoos' is a typo for 'shoes'. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect; it needs to connect the ideas properly and use plural 'shoes'.

× I really bought the suit online.

✓ I have bought shoes online.

The present perfect tense 'have bought' is more appropriate to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'suit' should be 'shoes' to match the context.

× I prefer buying the suit in the store to make sure the suit the pairs of shoes is perfect fit and comfortable by walking.

✓ I prefer buying shoes in the store to make sure the pairs of shoes fit perfectly and are comfortable when walking.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches and awkward phrasing. 'Suit' should be 'shoes', and 'is perfect fit' should be 'fit perfectly' with plural agreement.

× I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, around 50 to 100 per pair.

✓ I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, around 50 to 100 dollars per pair.

Adding 'dollars' clarifies the currency, improving the sentence's clarity.

× I prefer invest in good quality shoes to make sure it's comfortable and durable.

✓ I prefer to invest in good quality shoes to make sure they are comfortable and durable.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' before the verb 'invest'. Also, 'it's' should be 'they are' to agree with the plural 'shoes'.

× I prefer both shoes are flexible and comfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer shoes that are both flexible and comfortable.

The original sentence is redundant and awkward. The correction removes repetition and clarifies the meaning.

× It depends on what activity or what schedule I have.

✓ It depends on the activity or schedule I have.

The phrase 'what activity or what schedule' is redundant; simplifying improves clarity.

× For example, if I meet my friends, I probably are just organised and wear the festival shoes.

✓ For example, if I meet my friends, I am probably just organised and wear festival shoes.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'am' instead of 'are' for correct subject-verb agreement.