Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: សូមពន្យល់ឲ្យច្បាស់ថាអ្នកចូលចិត្តទិញស្បែកជើងយ៉ាងដូចម្តេច និងបញ្ជាក់ពីបរិមាណឬកំឡុងពេលដែលអ្នកទិញ។ កុំប្រើពាក្យមិនត្រឹមត្រូវដូចជា "Yes I know"។

例: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often, usually every few months when I need new ones.

提案: ពេលឆ្លើយសំណួរនេះ អ្នកអាចបន្ថែមព័ត៌មានបន្ថែមដើម្បីធ្វើឲ្យការឆ្លើយមានភាពពេញលេញ និងធ្វើឲ្យការសន្ទនាមានភាពច្បាស់លាស់។

例: No, I haven't bought shoes online yet because I prefer to try them on in the store first.

提案: សូមបញ្ជាក់ពីការចំណាយរបស់អ្នកជាមួយនឹងពាក្យដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ និងបន្ថែមព័ត៌មានបន្ថែមដើម្បីឲ្យចម្លើយមានភាពពេញលេញ។

例: I usually spend around $10 on shoes because I prefer affordable options.

提案: ចូរឆ្លើយដោយផ្តោតលើសំណួរនិងប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសត្រឹមត្រូវ។ កុំចាប់ផ្តើមឆ្លើយដោយពាក្យ "And" ហើយបន្ថែមមូលហេតុឬការពិពណ៌នាដើម្បីបង្ហាញពីមូលហេតុដែលអ្នកជ្រើសរើស។

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk long distances and need good support.

× Yes I know, I usually buy shoes here.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually buy shoes here.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and clarity. 'Yes I know' is not an appropriate response to 'Do you like buying shoes?'. The correct response should affirm the question, such as 'Yes, I do.' followed by the additional information. Adding a comma after 'Yes' improves readability.

× I usually spend on shoes only $10.

✓ I usually spend only $10 on shoes.

The placement of 'only' is incorrect. 'Only' should be placed before the amount to correctly modify it. Also, the phrase 'spend on shoes only $10' is awkward; the correct order is 'spend only $10 on shoes.'

× And I choose comfortable shoes.

✓ I choose comfortable shoes.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally discouraged in formal speech. Removing 'And' improves sentence structure and clarity.