Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“like buy shoes”应为“like buying shoes”。此外，句子结构混乱，信息表达不清晰。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy shoes online about twice a week because I enjoy trying different styles.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，且缺少逻辑连接词。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I often buy boat shoes online because there are many options and clear pictures, so I can easily choose the ones I like.

提案: 回答内容不明确，数字表达混乱，缺乏具体信息。建议明确说明价格范围，并用完整句子表达。

例: I usually spend between 150 and 600 yuan on shoes, depending on the style and brand.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“fish style”应为“fashion style”，表达不清晰。建议注意发音和词汇准确性，简洁表达观点。

例: I prefer fashionable shoes because I think style is very important, and fashionable shoes look more beautiful than comfortable ones.

× Yeah, I like buy shoes.

✓ Yeah, I like buying shoes.

动词like后面应接动名词形式buying，而不是动词原形buy。

× I always buy shoes online and about one week twice to buy shoes and I like the kind of different types of shoes.

✓ I always buy shoes online, about twice a week, and I like different types of shoes.

时间频率表达应放在句中合适位置，原句中时间状语顺序混乱，且表达不清晰。

× Yes, I always bought boat shoes online because I think you can to have many shoes and the picture.

✓ Yes, I always buy boat shoes online because I think you can have many shoes and see the pictures.

句子时态应与上下文一致，表达习惯动作用一般现在时；另外，'can to have'错误，应为'can have'。

× Yes, I always bought boat shoes online because I think you can to have many shoes and the picture.

✓ Yes, I always buy boat shoes online because I think you can have many shoes and see the pictures.

'can to have'中多余了介词'to'，应直接用'can have'。

× You can choose the picture and choose the you like 1 to buy it.

✓ You can choose the picture and choose the one you like to buy.

'the you like 1'结构错误，应为'the one you like'，指代正确。

× I usually pay till about 15 to 500 to 600 to buy shoes, maybe two more.

✓ I usually pay about 15 to 500 or 600 to buy shoes, maybe a bit more.

'pay till about'用法错误，'till'不适合此处，且数字表达应更清晰。

× Uh, I like to, uh, prefer fashionable shoes because I think fish style is too important and the, the fashionable shoes is it's a most beautiful than comfortable shoes.

✓ Uh, I prefer fashionable shoes because I think fashion style is very important, and fashionable shoes are more beautiful than comfortable shoes.

'fish style'应为'fashion style'；'is it's a most beautiful'结构错误，应为'are more beautiful'，比较级用法错误。

× the fashionable shoes is it's a most beautiful than comfortable shoes.

✓ The fashionable shoes are more beautiful than comfortable shoes.

主语复数时，谓语动词应用复数形式'are'，且比较级结构应正确使用。