Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp và câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I like buying shoes occasionally. I usually buy new shoes a few times a year, especially when there is a sale.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng bị lặp từ và lỗi phát âm, ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online. It is convenient because I can choose from many designs and brands.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và không trả lời đúng câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về số tiền bạn thường chi tiêu cho giày, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I usually spend around 100 dollars on a pair of shoes because I think quality is important.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn.

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they help me relax and are better for walking long distances.

× Yet occasionally, occasionally I play parental, but I only do it when I needs a new beer.

✓ Yet occasionally, occasionally I play parental, but I only do it when I need a new pair.

The verb 'needs' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'need' in the present tense. Also, 'beer' seems to be a typo for 'pair' (of shoes). The verb should agree with the subject in number and person.

× I usually survive show a few times a year, especially when they are a cell.

✓ I usually buy shoes a few times a year, especially when they are on sale.

The word 'show' should be plural 'shoes' to match the meaning. Also, 'survive' and 'cell' are incorrect words here; 'buy' and 'sale' are appropriate. This correction addresses pluralization and word choice.

× Yes, I have both show online.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online.

The verb 'both' is incorrect; the past participle 'bought' is needed after 'have' to form the present perfect tense. This corrects the verb form to properly express past action relevant to the present.

× It's easy because I because I have so much choice, design and brands I can look for good shows.

✓ It's easy because I have so many choices, designs, and brands to look for good shoes.

The sentence has repetition and incorrect word forms. 'Because I because I' is redundant. 'Choice' should be plural 'choices' to match 'so many'. 'Design' should be plural 'designs'. 'Shows' should be 'shoes'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I usually suspend umm. Have one $1000 because it's it's help.

✓ I usually spend about $100 on shoes because it's helpful.

'Suspend' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'spend'. 'Have one $1000' is incorrect quantifier usage; 'about $100' is more natural. 'It's help' should be 'it's helpful'. This corrects verb choice and quantifier usage.

× If I choose vegetable salad and comfortable show, I choose comfortable so because it makes me relax and.

✓ If I choose between fashionable and comfortable shoes, I choose comfortable ones because they make me relax.

'Vegetable salad' is incorrect and irrelevant; likely meant 'fashionable'. 'Show' should be 'shoes'. 'So' is unnecessary. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'shoes'. This corrects pronoun agreement and word choice.

× Walking long time first of all not better, but efficient only.

✓ Walking for a long time is not better, but it is more efficient.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'for a long time' clarifies duration. 'Not better, but efficient only' is rephrased to 'not better, but it is more efficient' for clarity and grammatical correctness.