Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“must”使用过多且不够自然。可以更简洁地说明购买频率和原因，增加连贯性。

例: I don't buy shoes very often, usually only twice a year because I'm a student and have limited pocket money. Also, I need to ask my parents for money, which makes it a bit inconvenient.

提案: 回答中应注意语法和表达的准确性，如“make my shoes broke”应改为“if my shoes get damaged”。同时，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's very convenient. However, sometimes it's difficult to get them repaired if they get damaged.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但“other some necessities”表达不自然，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式。

例: I usually don't spend much money on shoes because they are not very important to me. Instead, I spend more on clothes and other essentials.

提案: 回答中应注意语法和表达的准确性，如“most time”应为“most of the time”，并且句子结构可以更自然。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are more practical. Also, fashionable shoes are usually quite expensive for me.

× Personally, I don't buy shoes very frequently, just twice a year. This is because I don't have enough pocket money because I'm a student, so I must.

✓ Personally, I don't buy shoes very frequently, just twice a year. This is because I don't have enough pocket money because I'm a student, so I must ask.

句子中“so I must”缺少后续动词，导致表达不完整。情态动词must后应接动词原形，补充完整句子使其语义明确。建议在must后加上动词ask。

× But sometimes it is very difficult for me to repair them if I make my shoes broke.

✓ But sometimes it is very difficult for me to repair them if I make my shoes break.

句子中“make my shoes broke”时态错误，动词make后接宾语加动词原形，不能用过去式broke。应改为break。

× I think I spend more money on my clothes and other some necessities.

✓ I think I spend more money on my clothes and some other necessities.

“other some necessities”词序错误，正确表达应为“some other necessities”，即“其他一些必需品”。应调整形容词顺序。

× I think fashionable shoes also don't have more function than comfortable shoes and plus most time it is very pricey for me buying fashionable shoes.

✓ I think fashionable shoes also don't have more functions than comfortable shoes and plus most of the time it is very pricey for me to buy fashionable shoes.

“more function”应为复数“more functions”，因为function可数；“most time”应为“most of the time”；“buying fashionable shoes”前应加不定式to，构成“for me to buy fashionable shoes”。