Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
No, I don't really like to buy shoes and I seldom go to buy those. The reason is that I'm I'm not that fond of shopping and I would like to use my shoes for for a long time.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
No, I haven't. I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer going brick and mortar stores and. Try them on to check the size and texture of them and it's more.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
Well, I rarely spend money on shoes because I'm quite frugal and I would like to use my shoes for a long time. So usually I I I will buy those durable shoes and it's very.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
Definitely, I prefer to comfortable shoes. Uh, that is because I don't, I don't really care about the appearance of shoes or clothes and I I'm keen on those durable, good quality things.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 75.0提案: Answerは自然ですが、"I'm I'm"や"for for"のような繰り返しを避け、より簡潔に話す練習をしましょう。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使って文をつなげると、より効果的です。
例: No, I don't really like buying shoes and seldom do so because I'm not fond of shopping, and I prefer to use my shoes for a long time.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答が途中で切れているため、文を完結させる練習が必要です。また、"brick and mortar stores"の後に続く内容を明確にし、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いです。
例: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer going to brick and mortar stores to try them on and check their size and texture, which is more reliable.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 60.0提案: 繰り返し（"I I I"）や文の途中で終わっている点を改善しましょう。具体的な金額や頻度を加えると内容が豊かになります。
例: Well, I rarely spend much money on shoes because I'm quite frugal and prefer durable ones that last a long time, usually spending around $50 to $70.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 70.0提案: "prefer to comfortable shoes"は文法的に正しくないので"prefer comfortable shoes"に直しましょう。繰り返しを避け、理由を明確に述べると良いです。
例: Definitely, I prefer comfortable shoes because I don't care much about appearance and I focus on durability and good quality.
文法
× I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer going brick and mortar stores and.
✓ I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer going to brick and mortar stores and
The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by 'to' plus the base verb or by the gerund form. Here, 'going' should be followed by the preposition 'to' to indicate the destination, so 'going to brick and mortar stores' is correct.
× I prefer to comfortable shoes.
✓ I prefer comfortable shoes.
The verb 'prefer' is directly followed by the object without 'to' when the object is a noun phrase. 'To' is unnecessary here and makes the sentence ungrammatical.
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