Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然ですが、文法ミス（"what which shoes I want"）があり、意味が少し不明瞭です。また、回答がやや冗長で、5文以内にまとめるとより効果的です。具体的な頻度や理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often. When I do, I carefully choose shoes that are comfortable and suitable for traveling.

提案: 回答が断片的で、文法的な誤りや繰り返しがあります（"comfortable. Comfortable."）。また、理由の説明が不十分で、接続詞を使って論理的に話をつなげると良いです。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. However, I often find that they are not comfortable when I receive them, so I don't prefer buying online, although it can be convenient.

提案: 金額の表現が不明瞭（"1 or $200"）で、文法的な誤りもあります。内容が曖昧で、具体的な金額や理由を明確に述べる必要があります。文を簡潔にまとめ、接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。

例: I usually spend around $100 to $200 on shoes. Even if they are expensive, I prefer to buy shoes that are comfortable.

提案: 理由の説明は良いですが、文法ミス（"comfortable shoes is"）があります。接続詞の使い方を工夫し、より自然で流暢な表現にすると良いでしょう。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I work a lot. Comfortable shoes are also more durable and sustainable.

× I like to buy shoes.

✓ I like buying shoes.

In English, after 'like', the gerund form (verb + -ing) is commonly used to express general preferences. Using 'to buy' is not incorrect but less natural in this context.

× I consider carefully what which shoes I want.

✓ I consider carefully which shoes I want.

The phrase 'what which' is redundant and incorrect. Only 'which' is needed to introduce the relative clause.

× I especially choose comfortable and travel shoes.

✓ I especially choose comfortable and travel shoes.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no plural or singular issue detected here.

× When I receive shoes I notice it was not comfortable.

✓ When I receive shoes, I notice they are not comfortable.

The sentence mixes tenses and pronouns incorrectly. 'It' should be 'they' to refer to 'shoes' (plural), and the tense should be present to match 'receive'.

× Comfortable.

✓ They are not comfortable.

The single word 'Comfortable.' is a sentence fragment and lacks a verb and subject.

× So I don't like online but umm it is useful.

✓ So I don't like buying online, but umm, it is useful.

The phrase 'like online' is incomplete; 'buying online' clarifies the meaning. Also, commas improve sentence flow.

× I usually spend around 1 or $200 on shoes.

✓ I usually spend around $100 or $200 on shoes.

The number '1' is likely a typo or incomplete; it should be a monetary amount like '$100'.

× Even if shoes are expensive, I choose what I want.

✓ Even if shoes are expensive, I choose what I want.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no error detected.

× I especially comfortable things.

✓ I especially choose comfortable things.

The sentence lacks a verb; adding 'choose' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× comfortable shoes is durable and sustainable.

✓ comfortable shoes are durable and sustainable.

'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.