Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に答えることが重要です。

例: I like buying shoes, but not very often. I usually buy new shoes once every season because I think it's practical to update my footwear according to the weather.

提案: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や経験を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient and there are many options to choose from.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。金額について具体的に答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: I usually spend around ¥1000 or more on shoes. I try to save money because my mother gives me a monthly allowance, so I don't want to waste it.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。好みをはっきり述べ、その理由を具体的に説明する練習をしましょう。

例: I prefer fashionable shoes because I like stylish and colorful designs that help me express my personality.

× So so because I think buying shoots so many times is not necessarily.

✓ So so because I think buying shoes so many times is not necessary.

The word 'shoots' is a misspelling of 'shoes'. Also, 'not necessarily' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'not necessary' to express that buying shoes many times is not needed.

× It is good to buy shoes per seasons.

✓ It is good to buy shoes per season.

The phrase 'per seasons' is incorrect because 'per' is followed by a singular noun. Therefore, 'season' should be singular.

× I always my shoes online.

✓ I always buy my shoes online.

The sentence is missing the verb 'buy' to complete the meaning. 'Always' is an adverb that modifies the verb, so the verb must be present.

× Because I'm so. I'm so I'm thinking.

✓ Because I'm busy. I'm thinking.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It seems the speaker wanted to say 'Because I'm busy' or similar. The phrase 'I'm so' is incomplete and should be clarified.

× I don't want to so much money waste.

✓ I don't want to waste so much money.

The word order is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'waste so much money' where 'so much' quantifies 'money' and 'waste' is the verb.

× I prefer fashionable shows because I love killed cross killed things so I want to buy a shoes with a real live on or Calhoun color so I like which.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because I love colorful clothes, so I want to buy shoes with real leather or calico color, so I like them.

Multiple errors: 'shows' should be 'shoes'; 'killed cross killed things' is likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'colorful clothes'; 'a shoes' should be 'shoes' without 'a'; 'real live on' likely means 'real leather'; 'Calhoun color' likely means 'calico color'; 'so I like which' is unclear and corrected to 'so I like them'.