Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve doğal olmayan ifadeler var. "I don't like to buying shoes" yerine "I don't like buying shoes" demelisiniz. Ayrıca "shopping on the physically" ifadesi yanlış, "shopping in physical stores" daha doğru olur. Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve doğal yapmak için basit ve doğru yapılar kullanmalısınız.

例: Actually, I don't like buying shoes because I don't enjoy shopping in physical stores. However, I usually buy shoes about twice a year.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. "I have had both shoes online" ifadesi anlamsız, "I have bought shoes online" daha doğru olur. Ayrıca "a shoe size was wasn't correct" yerine "the shoe size was not correct" demelisiniz. Cümlenizi daha açık ve doğal yapmak için basit ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız.

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but the size was not correct. Therefore, I usually avoid buying shoes online now.

提案: Cümlenizde zaman uyumsuzluğu ve kelime hataları var. "I usually spent" yerine "I usually spend" demelisiniz. Ayrıca "100 between 200 Turks" ifadesi yanlış, "between 100 and 200 Turkish lira" daha doğru olur. Cümlenizi daha doğru ve anlaşılır yapmak için bu hataları düzeltmelisiniz.

例: I usually spend between 100 and 200 Turkish lira on my shoes.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve anlam hataları var. "I prefer comfortable shoes absolutely" yerine "I absolutely prefer comfortable shoes" demelisiniz. Ayrıca "my foot. Have a ache" ifadesi yanlış, "my feet ache" daha doğru olur. Cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için bu hataları düzeltmelisiniz.

例: I absolutely prefer comfortable shoes because my feet ache when I wear fashionable shoes.

× Actually I don't like to buying shoes because I don't like shopping on the physically.

✓ Actually I don't like buying shoes because I don't like shopping physically.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'on the physically' is incorrect; 'physically' alone is the correct adverb here.

× Yes, I have had both shoes online but a shoe size was wasn't correct.

✓ Yes, I have bought both shoes online but a shoe size wasn't correct.

The present perfect tense 'have had' is incorrect here; 'have bought' is appropriate for past experiences. Also, 'was wasn't' is a typo; 'wasn't' is correct.

× So I don't try that.

✓ So I don't try that.

This sentence is grammatically correct but semantically awkward. A better expression would be 'So I don't try that again' or 'So I don't do that anymore.' However, since it doesn't violate the listed grammar problem types, no correction is made.

× I usually spent 100 between 200 Turks for my shoes.

✓ I usually spend between 100 and 200 Turkish lira for my shoes.

The adverb 'usually' requires the present tense 'spend' instead of past tense 'spent'. Also, the phrase '100 between 200 Turks' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'between 100 and 200 Turkish lira'.

× I prefer comfortable shoes absolutely because my foot. Have a ache when I wear the fashionable shoes.

✓ I absolutely prefer comfortable shoes because my foot aches when I wear fashionable shoes.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Have a ache' should be 'aches'. 'Absolutely' should be placed before 'prefer' for correct emphasis. Also, 'the fashionable shoes' should be 'fashionable shoes' without 'the'.