Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như từ 'shows' thay vì 'shoes' và 'herculean designs' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác.

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially modern and stylish designs for women. I usually buy shoes a few times a year.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'watch shows' nên là 'buy shoes'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc mạch lạc và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. However, I think it is not always a good idea because shoe sizes can vary and sometimes the sizes on online shops are not accurate.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'refuse sandals' nên là 'prefer sandals'. Bạn nên chú ý dùng từ chính xác và câu trả lời ngắn gọn hơn.

例: I usually don't spend much money on shoes because the hot and humid weather in Vietnam makes wearing shoes uncomfortable. Therefore, I prefer sandals or flip flops and only buy shoes occasionally for special occasions.

提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ lặp lại như 'uh' và chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'fashionable shoes are' thay vì 'is'. Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn.

例: To be honest, I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. It depends on the occasion. Fashionable shoes are more suitable for going out with friends, while comfortable shoes are better for daily life.

× Yes, I do like buying shoes, especially shows that are modern and herculean designs for girls.

✓ Yes, I do like buying shoes, especially shoes that have modern and unique designs for girls.

The word 'herculean' is incorrectly used as an adjective to describe shoe designs; it means 'requiring great strength' and is not appropriate here. Also, 'shows' is a typo for 'shoes'. The sentence should use 'unique' or 'modern' to describe designs clearly.

× Yes, I now watch shows online.

✓ Yes, I now buy shoes online.

The word 'shows' is a typo and should be 'shoes'. Also, 'watch' is incorrect when referring to buying shoes; the correct verb is 'buy'.

× However, I think it is not a good way of buying shoes because shoes have different size and sometimes size on online shop are not legit.

✓ However, I think it is not a good way of buying shoes because shoes have different sizes and sometimes sizes on online shops are not accurate.

The word 'size' should be plural 'sizes' to agree with 'shoes'. Also, 'online shop' should be plural 'online shops' to match the context. 'Legit' is informal; 'accurate' or 'reliable' is better.

× I refuse sandals or flip flops which are more suitable for the climate and only by shoes occasionally, mostly for special occasion.

✓ I prefer sandals or flip flops which are more suitable for the climate and only buy shoes occasionally, mostly for special occasions.

The verb 'refuse' is incorrect here; 'prefer' fits the meaning. 'By' is a typo for 'buy'. 'Occasion' should be plural 'occasions'.

× Uh, fashionable shoes is more suitable for the like going out with friends and comfortable shows in my life daily.

✓ Uh, fashionable shoes are more suitable for going out with friends and comfortable shoes for my daily life.

'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Shows' is a typo for 'shoes'. The phrase 'the like going out' is incorrect and should be 'going out'. Also, 'in my life daily' is better expressed as 'for my daily life'.