Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
I like bank shoes after two or three months, uh, it's uh, my hobby and I want to wear a different type of shoes like sports shoes, formal shoes, casual shoes and slippers.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
Yes, I ever bought shoes online so many times because when we buy a shoe online then we choose so many varieties and different type of shoes and different brands and uh, maximum discounts are available on the online shopping.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
2000 to 3000 usually spend on shoes because I want to wear good variety of shoes and good brands. They are uh so expensive as where to local shoes.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
I always want to wear comfortable shoes because when I'm uh, running, then the comfortable shoes are good for my feet. That's why I always wear comfortable shoes.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 60.0提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'um'. Also, correct the phrase 'bank shoes' to 'buying shoes'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.
例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes every two or three months because it is my hobby. I like to have different types of shoes such as sports shoes, formal shoes, casual shoes, and slippers to match various occasions.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 65.0提案: Avoid grammatical errors like 'I ever bought' and use correct tense such as 'I have bought'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to make your answer coherent. Also, try to be more specific about your experience and keep your answer concise.
例: Yes, I have bought shoes online many times because there are many varieties and brands available. Moreover, online shopping often offers maximum discounts, which makes it more affordable.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 55.0提案: Make sure to form complete sentences and avoid awkward phrasing. For example, say 'I usually spend 2000 to 3000 rupees on shoes'. Also, explain why you spend that amount clearly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.
例: I usually spend between 2000 to 3000 rupees on shoes because I prefer good brands and a variety of styles. Although they are more expensive than local shoes, I believe the quality is better.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 70.0提案: Try to avoid repeating the same idea and filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to make your answer more coherent. Also, add more specific reasons or examples to support your preference.
例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they protect my feet, especially when I am running. Therefore, I always choose comfort over fashion to avoid any pain or injury.
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