Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时表达不够自然，有些语法和表达不准确，如“there's a fixed frequency or something like that”不够清晰。建议用更简洁明确的句子表达频率，并注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't have a fixed schedule. Usually, I buy shoes when I go shopping with friends and find a cute pair within my budget.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但有重复词汇（"was was"），语法时态使用不当（应为"have bought"）。建议注意语法时态和避免重复，同时可以用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but it was a terrible experience because the quality was poor and the price was quite high. As a result, I felt disappointed and the shoes were uncomfortable to wear.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇（"after after"），表达稍显复杂且有些口语化。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更正式的表达。

例: It depends on the situation. When I shop alone with friends, I avoid buying expensive shoes because I don't have a stable income. However, when I shop with my mom, I don't worry much about the price because she likes to treat me.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误（"dead life"应为"daily life"，"send"应为"stand"，"discomfortable"应为"uncomfortable"，"football problem"可能是拼写错误）。建议加强词汇准确性，避免拼写错误，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is essential for daily life, especially when I have to walk or stand for long periods. For example, even if high-heeled shoes look stylish, I wouldn't choose them if they cause pain or discomfort. In my opinion, comfortable shoes can prevent foot problems.

× Yes, I had bought shoes online before, but unfortunately it was a terrible experience because the quality of the shoes was very poor.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but unfortunately it was a terrible experience because the quality of the shoes was very poor.

这里使用过去完成时（had bought）不合适，因为句子中没有表示过去某一时间之前的动作。正确用法是现在完成时（have bought），表示过去发生的经历。

× Moreover, the price was was quite expensive, which made me feel disappointed, and the shoes were also uncomfortable to wear.

✓ Moreover, the price was quite expensive, which made me feel disappointed, and the shoes were also uncomfortable to wear.

句子中“was was”重复了，属于拼写错误，应删除多余的“was”。

× Well, I think it depends on different situation.

✓ Well, I think it depends on different situations.

“situation”应使用复数形式“situations”，因为这里指的是多种不同的情况，符合语境。

× When I go shopping with my friends on my own, I wouldn't say I wouldn't buy something too expensive 'cause after after all I don't have a stable income yet.

✓ When I go shopping with my friends on my own, I wouldn't say I buy something too expensive 'cause after all I don't have a stable income yet.

句中“wouldn't say I wouldn't buy”结构重复且不自然，改为“I wouldn't say I buy”更符合表达习惯。并且“after after all”重复，应删除一个“after”。

× Well, I prefer comfortable shoes because comfortable is essential for the dead life, especially when I had to walk or send for a long periods.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is essential for daily life, especially when I have to walk or stand for long periods.

“dead life”应为“daily life”，“had to”应为“have to”表示现在的习惯，“send”应为“stand”，且“for a long periods”应为“for long periods”，去掉冠词“a”。

× For example, even if a pair of high heeled shoes looks very stylish, I wouldn't choose it if they caused pain or discomfortable.

✓ For example, even if a pair of high-heeled shoes looks very stylish, I wouldn't choose them if they caused pain or discomfort.

“a pair of shoes”作为复数，代词应使用“them”而非“it”；“discomfortable”不是正确单词，应使用“discomfort”。

× In my opinion, comfortable shoes can avoid some football problem.

✓ In my opinion, comfortable shoes can prevent some foot problems.

“football problem”错误，应为“foot problems”，表示脚部问题；“avoid”改为“prevent”更符合语境。