Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但表达略显重复且不够简洁。建议减少冗余，直接回答问题，并用连接词丰富句子，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, although I don't do it very often. Usually, I purchase new pairs once or twice a month during the summer because I like to update my style for the season.

提案: 回答基本清晰，但开头的"Who's online?"不自然且无关。建议去掉无关内容，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because it is very convenient, and I can exchange them without any return fees, which makes the process hassle-free.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达不准确的问题，如"SH new shoes"不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇，并简化句子结构。

例: I usually spend about 1000 RMB on shoes during the summer because I buy two or three pairs, and they are generally affordable.

提案: 回答简洁且表达清楚，但可以通过添加连接词和更多细节使答案更丰富。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because my feet often feel tired and sore after walking for a long time, so comfort is more important to me than fashion.

× I usually buy shoes online because it's really convenient and also I can exchange it without any return fees.

✓ I usually buy shoes online because it's really convenient and also I can exchange them without any return fees.

这里的代词“it”指代的是复数名词“shoes”，应使用复数代词“them”来保持代词与先行词在数上的一致。

× I would say only 1000 RMB for buying shoes during the summer because I only buy two or three SH new shoes and they are not really expensive.

✓ I would say only 1000 RMB for buying shoes during the summer because I only buy two or three new SH shoes and they are not really expensive.

形容词的顺序应为限定词+数量词+形容词+名词，原句中“SH new shoes”形容词顺序不正确，应调整为“new SH shoes”。