Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，表达不够直接，且句子结构不完整。建议直接回答问题，表达清晰简洁。

例: I don't buy shoes very often; usually, I purchase them only when I really need a new pair.

提案: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it is cheaper and more convenient than shopping in malls. For instance, I often browse websites like Jing Dong and Taobao, where there are many discounts and a wide variety of styles to choose from.

提案: 回答内容不够相关且表达混乱，缺乏逻辑和连贯性。建议紧扣问题，避免无关信息，表达清晰。

例: I usually spend about 400 RMB on a new pair of shoes because I prefer good quality that lasts long.

提案: 回答内容基本符合要求，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意词汇准确性和语法正确。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they suit my daily routine better. For example, since I live on campus and walk a lot, comfortable shoes help me avoid foot pain and keep me active all day.

× How often I don't really have strong feelings about it.

✓ I don't really have strong feelings about how often.

句子结构错误，原句中疑问词'How often'的位置不正确，导致句子不通顺。应将其放在句尾或改为陈述句结构。

× I usually buy shoes when I need a new one.

✓ I usually buy shoes when I need new ones.

名词单复数错误，shoes是复数，前面的one应改为复数形式ones以保持一致。

× I have bought shoes online because I find it much cheaper and more convenient than buying them in the shopping mall.

✓ I have bought shoes online because I find it much cheaper and more convenient than buying them at the shopping mall.

介词使用错误，表示在某个具体地点时，通常用at而不是in。

× When I buy a new pair of shoes it usually costs me around 400 RMB.

✓ When I buy a new pair of shoes, it usually costs me around 400 RMB.

缺少逗号导致句子结构不清晰，添加逗号使句子更通顺。

× I enjoy getting lining products mainly because Sony Action is their spokesperson.

✓ I enjoy getting lining products mainly because Sony Action is its spokesperson.

代词使用错误，指代不明确，lining products是单数概念时应使用its而非their。

× Is honestly give me a sense of joy when I wear the same outfits as him.

✓ It honestly gives me a sense of joy when I wear the same outfits as him.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整，应加上主语it并调整动词形式。

× I prefer comfort shoes because they are more practical for my daily routine.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because they are more practical for my daily routine.

形容词使用错误，comfort是名词，应使用形容词comfortable来修饰shoes。

× For instance, I live on campus and I have to walk from my dormitory to the classroom every day, so wearing comfort juice helps me avoid foot pain and stay active throughout the day.

✓ For instance, I live on campus and I have to walk from my dormitory to the classroom every day, so wearing comfortable shoes helps me avoid foot pain and stay active throughout the day.

单词错误，juice是果汁，应为shoes，且形容词应为comfortable。