Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Yes, I absolutely love buying shoes, especially in physical stores because I enjoy the experience of shopping. It's one of my hobbies and I prefer trying it while shopping and fit them well. And trying them are are they comfortable or not? I usually buy new shoes once in a month.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
Uh, yes, I, I have bought a pair of shoes online and it was a good experience because they fit me well and were comfortable. However, I usually prefer to buy shoes in a physical store so I can try them on and see how they look and feel them, uh, before uh, purchasing. This way I can be sure, uh, they suit me, uh, my feet.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
It usually depends on the brand and quality of the shoes. Sometimes I prefer to buy cheaper ones for activities like going to the gym or casual walks around my neighborhood. However, when I need shoes for everyday use, I tend to invest in more durable and comfortable ones.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
To be honest, I think both fashionable and comfortable shoes are important. I usually prefer fashionable shoes because they help me look stylish when I go outside with my friends or visit new places. However, I value comfort, especially when I walk a lot, so I try to find shoes that balance both style and comfort.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and correct, and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
例: Yes, I love buying shoes, especially in physical stores because I enjoy trying them on to check their fit and comfort. It's one of my hobbies, and I usually buy new shoes once a month.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and filler words like 'uh'. Try to speak more fluently and confidently. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating the same idea.
例: Yes, I have bought shoes online once, and they fit well and were comfortable. However, I usually prefer buying shoes in physical stores because I can try them on to see how they look and feel before purchasing, ensuring they suit my feet.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 85.0提案: Your answer is clear and well-structured with good use of linking words. To improve, try to add more specific details or examples to enrich your response and use a wider range of vocabulary.
例: The amount I spend on shoes depends on their brand and quality. For example, I buy inexpensive shoes for gym workouts or casual walks, but for daily wear, I invest in durable and comfortable shoes that last longer.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 90.0提案: Your answer is well-balanced and coherent with good vocabulary. To improve further, try to use more varied expressions and provide a specific example to support your opinion.
例: I believe both fashionable and comfortable shoes are important. For instance, I prefer stylish shoes when meeting friends or exploring new places, but I always ensure they are comfortable enough for long walks.
文法
× I prefer trying it while shopping and fit them well.
✓ I prefer trying them on while shopping to see if they fit well.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'trying it' and 'fit them well'. The correct expression is 'trying them on' (putting shoes on to check fit) and 'to see if they fit well'. This clarifies the action and uses the correct verb forms.
× And trying them are are they comfortable or not?
✓ And trying them to see if they are comfortable or not.
The original sentence has repeated 'are' and incorrect structure. The corrected sentence uses 'trying them to see if they are comfortable or not', which is grammatically correct and clear.
× I usually buy new shoes once in a month.
✓ I usually buy new shoes once a month.
The phrase 'once in a month' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'once a month' to indicate frequency.
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