Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "shoe is my very favorite items"; instead say "shoes are my favorite items." Also, use singular/plural correctly and try to link ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I love buying shoes because they are my favorite items to purchase. However, I don't buy them often; usually, I get two or three pairs a year, which is enough for me.

提案: Your answer explains your reason but can be more fluent and natural. Use correct prepositions and plural forms, and link your ideas better. For example, say "I don't trust online shopping much" and "the size chart was not accurate, so I stopped using the shoes."

例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I don't trust online shopping much. For example, last time I ordered shoes online, but the size chart was inaccurate, so I couldn't use them.

提案: Your answer is informative but can be more structured and natural. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast, and correct phrases like 'for my university' instead of 'for my universities.'

例: It depends on the purpose. When I buy shoes for university, I usually spend around 4,000 to 5,000 taka. However, for casual use, my budget is about 2,000 to 3,000 taka.

提案: Your answer conveys your preference but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'in my opinion' and use correct expressions like 'comfort is more important than fashion.'

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because, in my opinion, comfort is more important than fashion. Therefore, I always choose comfort over style.

× Yes, I love buying shoes because shoe is my very favorite items that I purchase.

✓ Yes, I love buying shoes because shoes are my very favorite items that I purchase.

The word 'shoe' is singular but it should be plural 'shoes' to match 'items' which is plural. Also, 'is' should be changed to 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'shoes'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× It's almost two to three pair in a year.

✓ It's almost two to three pairs in a year.

The word 'pair' should be plural 'pairs' because it refers to more than one pair. This is a singular and plural issue.

× No, I never bought shoes online because personally I don't trust much on online shopping and there are also some reason behind this.

✓ No, I never bought shoes online because personally I don't trust online shopping much and there are also some reasons behind this.

The word 'reason' should be plural 'reasons' because it refers to multiple reasons. Also, 'trust much on' is incorrect; it should be 'trust online shopping much'. This is a singular and plural issue and preposition misuse.

× Last time I ordered a shoes from online and the size chart was not appropriate so I don't use the shoe anymore.

✓ Last time I ordered shoes online and the size chart was not appropriate so I don't use the shoes anymore.

The phrase 'a shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'from online' should be 'online'. 'The shoe' should be plural 'the shoes' to match the context. This is a singular and plural issue and preposition misuse.

× No, I never bought shoes online because personally I don't trust much on online shopping and there are also some reason behind this.

✓ No, I never bought shoes online because personally I don't trust online shopping much and there are also some reasons behind this.

The preposition 'on' after 'trust much' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'trust online shopping much' without 'on'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× It depends because when I purchase shoes for my universities the budget is high and it's almost 4 to 5000 taka and when I buy shoes for my casual use then the budget is around 2000 to 3000 taka.

✓ It depends because when I purchase shoes for my university the budget is high and it's almost 4 to 5000 taka and when I buy shoes for my casual use then the budget is around 2000 to 3000 taka.

The word 'universities' should be singular 'university' because it refers to one institution. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Personally, I must prefer comfortable shoes because in my opinion and also for myself, comfortable is more prior than fashion.

✓ Personally, I prefer comfortable shoes because in my opinion and also for myself, comfort is more important than fashion.

The phrase 'must prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' alone is sufficient. 'Comfortable is more prior' is incorrect; it should be 'comfort is more important'. 'Prior' is not used in this way. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs.