Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法有误，如“a suitable and fashionable shoes”应为“suitable and fashionable shoes”。回答较为简短，缺少具体细节和连接词，建议增加购买鞋子的频率和具体原因，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I don't like buying shoes very much because my size is larger than average for women, which makes it difficult to find suitable and fashionable options. Therefore, I only buy shoes when necessary, maybe once or twice a year.

提案: 时态使用不准确，应使用现在完成时“I have never bought shoes online”。句子结构简单，缺少连接词和具体细节，建议补充原因并使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I have never bought shoes online because I am afraid of ordering the wrong size, and sometimes the shoes might not look like the photos on the website.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误，“shows”应为“shoes”，表达不够连贯，缺少单位（货币单位），建议补充具体货币单位，使用连接词并改正拼写错误。

例: I usually spend about 1500 to 2500 yuan on shoes because I go jogging three times a week, so my shoes wear out quickly.

提案: 回答表达基本清晰，但“for show to my classmates”表达不自然，建议改为“to show off to my classmates”。同时可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富。

例: When I was young, I used to choose fashionable shoes to show off to my classmates. However, now I prefer comfortable shoes because I value practicality more.

× Actually, I don't like buying shoes because my size is too big for a woman, so it's hard to choose a suitable and fashionable shoes for me.

✓ Actually, I don't like buying shoes because my size is too big for a woman, so it's hard to choose suitable and fashionable shoes for me.

这里的'shoes'是复数，前面的形容词'suitable and fashionable'不需要加冠词'a'，因为'a'用于单数名词。应去掉'a'，保持复数形式。

× I had never bought shoes online.

✓ I have never bought shoes online.

这里表示过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时'have never bought'，而不是过去完成时'had never bought'。

× I'm afraid that I buy a wrong size or the pair of shoes is not look like the photo.

✓ I'm afraid that I will buy a wrong size or the pair of shoes will not look like the photo.

这里表达将来可能发生的事情，应该用将来时'will buy'和'will not look'，而不是一般现在时'buy'和'is not look'。

× Therefore the shows are easily broken.

✓ Therefore the shoes are easily broken.

'shows'是拼写错误，正确单词是'shoes'，表示鞋子。

× When I was young, I used to choose fashionable shoes for show to my classmates.

✓ When I was young, I used to choose fashionable shoes to show to my classmates.

这里'show'是动词，应该放在'for'后面改为不定式'to show'，表示目的。

× In comparison, I choose the comfortable shoes now.

✓ In comparison, I choose comfortable shoes now.

'comfortable shoes'前不需要定冠词'the'，因为这里泛指舒适的鞋子。