Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。可以用更自然的表达方式来说明买鞋的频率和原因。

例: I don't buy shoes often; usually, I only purchase new ones when my old shoes are worn out because I value durability.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的时态和连贯的句子结构，避免重复，并且补充具体细节使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because they are usually cheaper than in physical stores. I mostly purchase sandals and sports shoes, choosing them for their durability.

提案: 回答不完整且语法混乱，建议先明确回答问题，然后用连贯的句子补充具体细节，避免语法错误和重复。

例: It depends on the type of shoes. For sandals, I usually spend less than CN¥100 because I look for comfort and durability. For sports shoes, I am willing to spend more, but I only buy shoes when necessary.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意时态一致性和名词单复数形式，表达更自然流畅。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot during work. For example, I bought a pair of black sports shoes last year, and they are still in good condition because they are both comfortable and durable.

× I seldom buy shoes because I only buy it when I need it uh, since the old shoes was broken then I will buy it for durability and uh.

✓ I seldom buy shoes because I only buy them when I need to. Since the old shoes were broken, I will buy new ones for durability.

这里'shoes'是复数，代词应使用'them'而不是'it'。'old shoes'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'were'，而不是单数'was'。此外，句子中缺少连贯性，需调整句子结构使其更通顺。

× Yes, I always watch shoes online because it's cheaper than in the store. I always bought sandal umm sports shoes. Uh, I bought shoes because of their durability and umm.

✓ Yes, I always look at shoes online because they're cheaper than in the store. I usually buy sandals and sports shoes. I buy shoes because of their durability.

这里时态混乱，'always bought'和'bought'用过去式不合适，应使用一般现在时表示习惯动作。'watch shoes'表达不准确，应为'look at shoes'。

× It depends, if I want to buy a sandals I maybe I will spend under CN¥100 since its uh, durability and comfortable. Also I like to buy uh the sport shoes but always I uh only buy shoes when.

✓ It depends. If I want to buy sandals, maybe I will spend under CN¥100 because of their durability and comfort. Also, I like to buy sports shoes, but I only buy shoes when needed.

'a sandals'错误，'sandals'是复数，不用冠词'a'。'its durability and comfortable'中，'its'指代不明，且'adjective'应改为'noun'形式'comfort'。句子结构不完整，需调整。

× Last time I bought a black sports shoes. It is very comfortable and durable. I wear it for almost one years and is still a completely good shoes.

✓ Last time I bought a pair of black sports shoes. They are very comfortable and durable. I have worn them for almost one year and they are still completely good shoes.

'a black sports shoes'中'shoes'是复数，需用'a pair of'表示一双鞋。'It'指代复数'shoes'应改为'they'。'one years'应为'single year'，且动词时态应为现在完成时'have worn'。