Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
I lie by ensure. Umm, I often buy shoe uh is twice a week.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
I haven't brushed through a lie because I I afraid. Outfit, Outfit. Tick.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
I usually spend on shoe shoe. Course much money.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
I prefer comfortable shoe because, uh, when, when I, uh, go to school, umm, comfortable shoe is a convenient.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 30.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, không quá dài.
例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes about twice a week because I enjoy updating my style.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 20.0提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm, ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ý của mình.
例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I am afraid that the size might not fit well.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 15.0提案: Câu trả lời thiếu nội dung và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp với số tiền cụ thể hoặc khoảng giá, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.
例: I usually spend around 50 to 100 dollars when I buy shoes, depending on the brand and style.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 50.0提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện về ngữ pháp và sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
例: I prefer comfortable shoes because when I go to school, they are more convenient and help me walk easily throughout the day.
文法
× I lie by ensure.
✓ I live by myself.
The student likely intended to say 'I live by myself' but used incorrect words 'lie by ensure'. The pronouns and words used are incorrect and do not convey the intended meaning. The correct phrase is 'I live by myself' meaning living alone.
× I often buy shoe uh is twice a week.
✓ I often buy shoes, uh, twice a week.
The noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because the student is talking about buying more than one shoe over time. Also, the phrase 'uh is' is unnecessary and incorrect here.
× I haven't brushed through a lie because I I afraid.
✓ I haven't bought shoes online because I am afraid.
The student used 'brushed through a lie' which is incorrect and does not make sense. The intended meaning is 'bought shoes online'. Also, 'I I afraid' is incorrect; it should be 'I am afraid' to express fear properly.
× I usually spend on shoe shoe. Course much money.
✓ I usually spend a lot of money on shoes.
The phrase 'shoe shoe' is incorrect; it should be plural 'shoes'. 'Course much money' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a lot of money' to express quantity.
× I prefer comfortable shoe because, uh, when, when I, uh, go to school, umm, comfortable shoe is a convenient.
✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because, uh, when I go to school, umm, comfortable shoes are convenient.
The noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because the student is talking generally about shoes. Also, 'comfortable shoe is a convenient' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable shoes are convenient' to agree in number and use the adjective correctly.
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