Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的に不正確な部分が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で簡潔な文を使い、具体的な理由や頻度を述べると良いでしょう。例えば、"I like buying jogging shoes and boots because they are comfortable. I buy shoes sometimes when I need new ones."のように表現してください。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially jogging shoes and boots because they are very comfortable. I usually buy shoes a few times a year when I need new ones.

提案: 文が途中で終わっており、意味が不明瞭です。オンラインでの経験について、具体的な問題点を明確に述べると良いでしょう。例えば、"I have bought shoes online, but the size I chose did not fit well, so I had a bad experience."のように表現してください。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but I had a bad experience because the size I chose did not fit me well.

提案: 金額の表現が少し不自然で、比較の部分もわかりにくいです。金額を明確にし、比較を簡潔に述べると良いでしょう。例えば、"I usually spend about 100 to 150 dollars on shoes, but soccer boots can be more expensive, around 200 dollars."のように表現してください。

例: I usually spend about 100 to 150 dollars on shoes, but if I buy soccer boots, they can cost around 200 dollars because they are more specialized.

提案: 理由は伝わりますが、表現が少しぎこちなく、文法的にも改善の余地があります。より自然な表現で理由を述べると良いでしょう。例えば、"That's a tough question, but I prefer comfortable shoes because I'm getting older and comfort is more important to me now."のように表現してください。

例: That's a tough question, but I prefer comfortable shoes because I'm getting older and comfort is more important to me now.

× I like especially, uh, it's a jogging shoes and uh, boots for uh, so comfortable because I like is that doing is uh, is a learning or is a soccer.

✓ I especially like jogging shoes and boots because they are so comfortable, especially for learning or playing soccer.

The original sentence misuses 'especially' and has awkward adjective placement. 'Jogging shoes' should be plural without 'a'. The sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity and correct adjective use.

× I like especially, uh, it's a jogging shoes and uh, boots for uh, so comfortable because I like is that doing is uh, is a learning or is a soccer.

✓ I especially like jogging shoes and boots because they are so comfortable, especially for learning or playing soccer.

The phrase 'a jogging shoes' incorrectly mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'shoes'. It should be 'jogging shoes' without 'a' to match plural form.

× I like especially, uh, it's a jogging shoes and uh, boots for uh, so comfortable because I like is that doing is uh, is a learning or is a soccer.

✓ I especially like jogging shoes and boots because they are so comfortable, especially for learning or playing soccer.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks clear subject-verb-object structure, making it difficult to understand. It needs to be restructured into a coherent sentence.

× Yes, I have bought shoes online before but I don't have good experience to be honestly because I chose I choose the my size the size for my shoes but it's not.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but I haven't had a good experience honestly because I chose my size, but it didn't fit.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly and has awkward phrasing. 'Don't have good experience' should be 'haven't had a good experience' to match past context. Also, 'chose I choose' is inconsistent; past tense 'chose' is correct here.

× Yes, I have bought shoes online before but I don't have good experience to be honestly because I chose I choose the my size the size for my shoes but it's not.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but I haven't had a good experience honestly because I chose my size, but it didn't fit.

The phrase 'good experience to be honestly' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a good experience, honestly' or 'honestly, I haven't had a good experience'. Also, 'for my shoes' is unnecessary after 'my size'.

× Well I usually spend on shoes about 100 to $150.00 I think, but if I choose the soccer boots then so it might be more expensive from them is a jogging shoes so about 200.

✓ Well, I usually spend about $100 to $150 on shoes, but if I choose soccer boots, they might be more expensive than jogging shoes, so about $200.

The original sentence misuses prepositions 'on' and 'from'. The correct preposition is 'spend about $100 to $150 on shoes'. Also, 'more expensive from them is a jogging shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'more expensive than jogging shoes'.

× Well I usually spend on shoes about 100 to $150.00 I think, but if I choose the soccer boots then so it might be more expensive from them is a jogging shoes so about 200.

✓ Well, I usually spend about $100 to $150 on shoes, but if I choose soccer boots, they might be more expensive than jogging shoes, so about $200.

The phrase 'a jogging shoes' incorrectly uses singular article 'a' with plural noun 'shoes'. It should be 'jogging shoes' without 'a'.

× It is very tough question for me, yes, But I prefer the comfortable shoes at the moment because I'm not young already.

✓ It is a very tough question for me, yes, but I prefer comfortable shoes at the moment because I'm not young anymore.

The phrase 'very tough question' needs the article 'a'. 'The comfortable shoes' should be 'comfortable shoes' without 'the' as a general preference. 'Not young already' is awkward; 'not young anymore' is the correct expression.

× It is very tough question for me, yes, But I prefer the comfortable shoes at the moment because I'm not young already.

✓ It is a very tough question for me, yes, but I prefer comfortable shoes at the moment because I'm not young anymore.

The definite article 'the' before 'comfortable shoes' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Also, 'very tough question' requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× It is very tough question for me, yes, But I prefer the comfortable shoes at the moment because I'm not young already.

✓ It is a very tough question for me, yes, but I prefer comfortable shoes at the moment because I'm not young anymore.

The conjunction 'But' should not be capitalized mid-sentence and should be 'but' to connect clauses properly.