Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, explain your reasons more clearly and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially twice a year. I usually buy one pair for summer and another for winter because the weather changes a lot.

提案: Provide a complete and clear answer. Avoid short and unclear responses. Add details and use linking words to make your answer more natural and informative.

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online twice. Both times, I purchased boots because they were not available in local stores.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and provide a clear, complete answer with relevant details. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on the main point.

例: Usually, I spend around 100 Georgian Lari on shoes. For example, last year I bought a pair of boots that cost 115 Lari.

提案: Try to express your opinion clearly and avoid excessive hesitation. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically and provide specific details.

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable shoes are often not comfortable. Therefore, I think it is better to wear comfortable shoes when going out.

× Yes, I like buying shoes, umm, especially twice a year because UH-11 of this it's for summer and one is, uh, for winter.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes, umm, especially twice a year because one is for summer and one is for winter.

The phrase 'UH-11 of this' is unclear and seems to be a mispronunciation or error. The correct expression should be 'one is for summer and one is for winter' to clearly indicate the two occasions for buying shoes. This correction addresses clarity and proper singular/plural usage.

× Yes, only twice it is boots.

✓ Yes, only twice, and they were boots.

The original sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and clarity. 'It is boots' is incorrect because 'boots' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and the verb 'were' to match past tense. Adding 'and' improves sentence flow.

× For example, one year ago, I buy the, I bought, uh, boots, uh, which cost, uh, 115, uh, Lottie, Georgie and Lottie, umm, and this is.

✓ For example, one year ago, I bought boots which cost 115 Lottie Georgie and Lottie.

The sentence mixes present tense 'buy' with past tense 'bought'. Since the action happened in the past ('one year ago'), the past tense 'bought' should be used consistently. Also, unnecessary fillers and repetitions are removed for clarity.

× Umm, I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable shoes. So maybe is uh, uh, shoes that they are not comfortable, uh, and it is good, uh, to uh, go somewhere with comfortable shoes.

✓ Umm, I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable shoes may not be comfortable, and it is good to go somewhere with comfortable shoes.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Because fashionable shoes' is incomplete; it needs a verb to explain why. The corrected sentence combines ideas properly and removes unnecessary fillers for clarity.