Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Votre réponse manque de clarté et de précision. Essayez d'utiliser des expressions plus naturelles et évitez les phrases confuses comme "in the Earth". De plus, donnez une fréquence claire et réaliste pour montrer votre maîtrise du sujet.

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often. Usually, I buy new shoes once or twice a year.

提案: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais pourrait être améliorée en utilisant des phrases plus fluides et en corrigeant les erreurs grammaticales, comme "a shoes" qui devrait être "shoes". Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus cohérente.

例: Yes, I sometimes buy shoes online, especially from brands like Puma and Nike because my size is always the same, so I don't have any problems with fitting.

提案: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et manque de structure claire. Évitez les hésitations et donnez une fourchette de prix précise. Utilisez des phrases complètes et évitez les répétitions inutiles.

例: It depends on my budget. Sometimes, I buy expensive shoes from brands like Valentino or Dior, but usually, I spend between $30 and $50 on shoes from brands like Puma and Nike.

提案: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être améliorée en corrigeant les erreurs grammaticales comme "it depend" qui devrait être "it depends". Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus fluide et naturelle.

例: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes, depending on the occasion. For example, I wear comfortable shoes to school, but I choose fashionable ones for parties, weddings, or other events.

× Maybe one time or two time in the Earth.

✓ Maybe one time or two times on Earth.

The word 'time' should be plural 'times' when referring to more than one occurrence. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on Earth' is the correct phrase to indicate location or context.

× I buy a shoes online from Puma and Nike also because my size is always the same so I don't have problem with that.

✓ I buy shoes online from Puma and Nike also because my size is always the same so I don't have a problem with that.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed. Also, 'problem' is countable here and needs the article 'a' before it.

× Maybe one time or two time in the Earth.

✓ Maybe one time or two times on Earth.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to the Earth as a location in this context; 'on Earth' is the correct usage.

× I buy a shoes online from Puma and Nike also because my size is always the same so I don't have problem with that.

✓ I buy shoes online from Puma and Nike also because my size is always the same so I don't have a problem with that.

The phrase 'buy a shoes online' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and does not take the article 'a'. Also, 'have problem' should be 'have a problem' because 'problem' is countable.

× Maybe 15 sometime.

✓ Maybe 15 sometimes.

The adverb 'sometimes' is the correct form to indicate occasional frequency, not 'sometime' which refers to an unspecified time.

× I prefer both, but it depend.

✓ I prefer both, but it depends.

The verb 'depend' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it', so it should be 'depends'.

× It depend where I'm going.

✓ It depends where I'm going.

The verb 'depend' must be conjugated as 'depends' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'.