Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Well shoes are just not my interest so I often wear ones until it got like too dirty and too old then I'll change it.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
Yes, I do like mostly my shopping online because the prices are more reasonable and especially shoes. I can choose many different types and many different colors that may be the stores they don't have.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
Well, I don't want to change my shoes too often, so I often buy an an expensive one because I believe that the quality is higher than the ones that are low. In the lower price. It's just like about $40.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
Well I prefer a pair of shoes that have both these elements, fashionable and comfortable. Because sometimes comfortable shoes are not good looking so I need them to be to have good appearance to to help me boost my confidence.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "ones". Hãy thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
例: I don't really like buying shoes frequently. I usually wear my shoes until they become too old or dirty, then I replace them with new ones.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời logic hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I do like mostly my shopping online" và dùng từ phù hợp hơn.
例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because the prices are more reasonable. Moreover, I can find many different styles and colors that are not available in physical stores.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 60.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
例: I usually spend around $40 on shoes because I prefer buying affordable ones. However, sometimes I invest in more expensive shoes for better quality and durability.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ như lặp từ "to to" và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.
例: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because comfortable shoes often don't look good. Having stylish shoes helps boost my confidence.
文法
× Well shoes are just not my interest so I often wear ones until it got like too dirty and too old then I'll change it.
✓ Well, shoes are just not my interest so I often wear ones until they get too dirty and too old, then I'll change them.
The pronouns 'ones' and 'it' do not agree in number with the plural noun 'shoes'. 'Ones' should be followed by 'they' and 'it' should be 'them' to maintain plural agreement.
× Well shoes are just not my interest so I often wear ones until it got like too dirty and too old then I'll change it.
✓ Well, shoes are just not my interest so I often wear ones until they get too dirty and too old, then I'll change them.
The verb 'got' is in past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'get' to match the habitual action described.
× Yes, I do like mostly my shopping online because the prices are more reasonable and especially shoes.
✓ Yes, I mostly like shopping online because the prices are more reasonable, especially for shoes.
The phrase 'I do like mostly my shopping online' is awkward and 'shopping' is uncountable here, so 'my shopping' is unnecessary. Also, 'especially shoes' needs a preposition 'for' to clarify meaning.
× Yes, I do like mostly my shopping online because the prices are more reasonable and especially shoes.
✓ Yes, I mostly like shopping online because the prices are more reasonable, especially for shoes.
The phrase 'especially shoes' lacks the preposition 'for' which is necessary to indicate that the prices are more reasonable for shoes.
× I can choose many different types and many different colors that may be the stores they don't have.
✓ I can choose many different types and many different colors that the stores may not have.
The phrase 'that may be the stores they don't have' is incorrect in word order and redundancy. Correct word order is 'that the stores may not have'.
× Well, I don't want to change my shoes too often, so I often buy an an expensive one because I believe that the quality is higher than the ones that are low.
✓ Well, I don't want to change my shoes too often, so I often buy an expensive pair because I believe that the quality is higher than that of cheaper ones.
'An an expensive one' is incorrect; 'an' is repeated and 'one' is vague for shoes. 'Pair' is the correct singular noun for shoes. Also, 'than the ones that are low' is unclear; 'cheaper ones' or 'that of cheaper ones' is better.
× In the lower price. It's just like about $40.
✓ At the lower price, it's just about $40.
The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at' is used to indicate a specific price point.
× Well I prefer a pair of shoes that have both these elements, fashionable and comfortable.
✓ Well, I prefer a pair of shoes that has both these elements, fashionable and comfortable.
The subject 'a pair' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'.
× Because sometimes comfortable shoes are not good looking so I need them to be to have good appearance to to help me boost my confidence.
✓ Because sometimes comfortable shoes are not good looking, I need them to have a good appearance to help me boost my confidence.
The sentence has redundant conjunctions 'because' and 'so' together, which is incorrect. Also, 'to be to have' is awkward; 'to have' suffices. The phrase 'good appearance' needs an article 'a'.
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