Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且信息不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单句表达频率和原因。

例: I don't buy shoes very often. Usually, I buy new shoes about once a month because I like to keep my collection updated.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用正确的句子结构，明确说明自己买鞋的习惯，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it is very convenient. For example, I often use the Zeus app in China, which offers many good shoes at reasonable prices.

提案: 回答内容与问题不符，且语句混乱。建议直接回答花费金额，并简要说明原因，避免无关内容。

例: I usually spend around 300 to 500 yuan on shoes because I prefer good quality and comfortable designs.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多。建议直接表达偏好，并用简单句说明原因，避免无关内容。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them for myself, and comfort is more important than fashion for me.

× Wow, I can say I'm a not often buy shoes one.

✓ Wow, I can say I'm not someone who often buys shoes.

这里'shoes'是复数，动词'buy'需要用第三人称单数形式'b uys'，且句子结构不正确，应该用'I'm not someone who often buys shoes'来表达。

× It's because I think I'm a sane person so maybe I will buy shoes once a month at home.

✓ It's because I think I'm a sensible person, so maybe I will buy shoes once a month.

'sane'意思是精神正常，语境不合，应该用'sensible'表示理智的。'at home'不合适，买鞋通常不说在家买，去掉更自然。

× That's because they buy something online is very convenient, such as I often buy my shoes on the app.

✓ That's because buying something online is very convenient; for example, I often buy my shoes on apps.

原句结构混乱，'they buy something online is'不正确，应使用动名词短语'buying something online'作主语。

× You know, in China Zeus app contain a lot of good shoes and in a good price.

✓ You know, in China, the Zeus app contains a lot of good shoes at good prices.

'contain'应为第三人称单数'contains'，'in a good price'应改为'at good prices'，表示价格合适。

× Well, you know, the Nick shoes in China is very popular and that shoes is have a good shape.

✓ Well, you know, Nike shoes in China are very popular and those shoes have a good shape.

'shoes'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'和'have'，'that shoes'应改为'those shoes'。

× So I think that sheep can like me.

✓ So I think those shoes can suit me.

'sheep'是错误单词，应为'shoes'，且'like me'不合适，应该用'suit me'表示合适。

× Beef fell in love with that.

✓ I fell in love with them.

'Beef'是错误单词，应为'I'，'that'指代不明确，鞋子用复数代词'them'。

× Well, prefer fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes.

✓ Well, do you prefer fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?

原句缺少主语和助动词，导致句子不完整，应补充完整疑问句结构。

× I will say I like comfortable one just because I think that shoes is not show that for anyone.

✓ I will say I like comfortable ones just because I think those shoes are not for showing off to anyone.

'one'应为复数'ones'，'shoes'复数，谓语动词应为'are'，'show that for anyone'表达不清，改为'for showing off to anyone'更自然。

× It's just for myself is because in China there has a ancient.

✓ It's just for myself because in China there is an ancient tradition.

'there has a ancient'错误，应为'there is an ancient'，'ancient'后应有名词'tradition'，句子更完整。