Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often because I already have many pairs and I need to save money.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ.

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because the prices are cheaper, although delivery can take a long time.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên nói rõ khoảng tiền bạn chi tiêu và lý do một cách đơn giản, dễ hiểu.

例: I usually spend between one million and five million Dong on shoes because I think good shoes are worth the price.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I prefer fashionable shoes because they match my T-shirts and jeans, and looking good is very important to me.

× I don't often like being shoes because I don't have much money and I I have many shoes, but I want to buy shoes because I.

✓ I don't often like buying shoes because I don't have much money and I already have many shoes, but I still want to buy more.

The phrase 'being shoes' is incorrect; the correct verb form is 'buying shoes'. The sentence also had repetition and incomplete thoughts. The corrected sentence uses proper verb forms and completes the idea clearly.

× Well, I will always buy shoes online because you don't like the price of shoe is cheap and not expensive and but it's a long is long time, so I don't always like yes.

✓ Well, I always buy shoes online because the prices are cheap and affordable, but sometimes it takes a long time, so I don't always buy online.

The original sentence misused modal verbs and had unclear phrasing. 'Will always' is better as 'always' for habitual actions. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correct modal verb usage.

× The money I uh spent this is uh from one third one million charge down to 5 million thousand 1000 Dong because it's can expensive. I don't have money, so I can risk it.

✓ The money I usually spend ranges from one million to five million Dong because shoes can be expensive. I don't have much money, so I can't risk spending too much.

The original sentence had incorrect quantifiers and confusing numbers. The correction clarifies the amount and corrects the modal verb usage to express inability to risk spending.

× Where to my might I prefer fashionable brochures because uh, is can have me, uh, give me a ** with my uh, T-shirt or the jeans and put, MMM, just look affordable is very, uh, important because it can hurt me.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because they can match my T-shirt or jeans and make me look good. Comfort is also very important because uncomfortable shoes can hurt me.

The original sentence had incorrect pronouns and unclear structure. 'Brochures' was likely a mispronunciation of 'shoes'. The correction uses proper pronouns and sentence structure to convey the intended meaning clearly.