Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误，建议回答时直接回应问题，避免无关内容，使用简单明了的句子，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes because they make me feel confident. I usually buy shoes about four times a year, mostly when my old ones are worn out or I find a new style I like.

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但有语法错误和用词不当，建议注意时态一致性和单词拼写，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it saves me a lot of time since I am quite busy. There are many options available online, which makes shopping easier. However, I sometimes visit stores if I need to try the shoes on.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法和表达错误，建议注意单复数和冠词的使用，句子结构应更清晰，避免拼写错误。

例: I usually spend about CN¥800 on a pair of shoes. I think this price is enough to buy good quality shoes with nice designs. For example, last year I bought a pair of sports shoes that were quite expensive but very comfortable to wear.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，内容不够连贯，建议使用简单句表达观点，避免不相关或错误的词汇，确保句子通顺且逻辑清晰。

例: I prefer fashionable shoes because I am interested in fashion. Although comfortable shoes are important, I enjoy wearing stylish shoes more. Fashionable shoes make me feel confident and happy.

× I don't buy Zen and we often maybe around 4 * a year.

✓ I don't buy often and maybe around 4 pairs a year.

这里'shoes'是可数名词，数量词后应使用复数形式'pairs'，且原句中'Zen'无意义，可能是拼写错误，应删除或更正。

× Usually when my older ones will alter or when I find appear.

✓ Usually when my older ones wear out or when I find new ones to appear.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，'alter'用法不当，应改为'wear out'表示旧鞋磨损，'find appear'不合语法，应补充完整表达。

× There are always many shoes online which makes shopping easily, but sometimes I still go to stories if I really need to try them on.

✓ There are always many shoes online which makes shopping easy, but sometimes I still go to stores if I really need to try them on.

'easily'是副词，修饰动词，句中应使用形容词'easy'修饰shopping；'stories'应为'stores'，表示商店。

× I usually spend about CN¥800 when a pot of shoes.

✓ I usually spend about CN¥800 on a pair of shoes.

'pot'应为'pair'，表示一双鞋，且介词应为'on'表示花费在某物上。

× I think this price is enough to get good quality shoes with a nice designs.

✓ I think this price is enough to get good quality shoes with nice designs.

'a'用于单数名词前，'designs'为复数，故不应加'a'。

× I remember buying a pair of sports shoes last year which was quite expensive but very comfortable to wear.

✓ I remember buying a pair of sports shoes last year which were quite expensive but very comfortable to wear.

'a pair of shoes'作为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'were'。

× I like to follow traders and explain my own study.

✓ I like to follow trends and express my own style.

'traders'应为'trends'（潮流），'explain my own study'表达不当，应为'express my own style'（表达自己的风格）。

× I enjoy shoes that took us stylish more wear.

✓ I enjoy shoes that look more stylish when worn.

原句语法混乱，'took us'无意义，应为'look'表示看起来，'more stylish'修饰鞋子，'when worn'表示穿着时。

× Fashionable shoes make me feel confident and delightedly.

✓ Fashionable shoes make me feel confident and delighted.

'delightedly'是副词，修饰动词，句中应使用形容词'delighted'修饰主语感受。