Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和词汇使用不当。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持观点。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy shoes about four times a year, especially when my old ones are worn out or I find a style I really like.

提案: 回答较为流畅，但存在语法错误和表达重复。建议注意时态一致，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it saves me a lot of time since I am quite busy. There are many options available online, which makes shopping easier. However, I sometimes visit stores if I want to try shoes on.

提案: 回答内容具体，但存在语法错误和词汇拼写错误。建议注意单复数形式和拼写，使用连接词丰富句子结构。

例: I usually spend about CN¥800 on shoes because I believe this amount can buy good quality and stylish shoes. For example, last year I bought a pair of sports shoes that were a bit expensive but very comfortable to wear.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法和词汇错误较多，影响理解。建议简化表达，直接说明偏好并给出理由，避免无意义词汇。

例: I prefer fashionable shoes because I am very interested in fashion. Although comfortable shoes are important, I enjoy wearing stylish shoes more because they make me feel confident and happy.

× I like buying shoes because they can challenging my study and make me feel happy and confident.

✓ I like buying shoes because they can challenge my study and make me feel happy and confident.

动词后面接动名词-ing形式时，必须是动词的正确形式。这里应使用动词原形challenge，而不是challenging。

× I don't bother seeing very often, maybe around 4 * a year.

✓ I don't buy shoes very often, maybe around 4 times a year.

这里表达频率时应使用times而不是*，且动词bother seeing不合适，应改为buy shoes。

× Usually when my older ones were all when I find appear I really like it.

✓ Usually, when my old shoes are all worn out, I look for new ones that I really like.

原句结构混乱，缺少连贯性和正确的时态，应调整句子结构使其通顺。

× Yes I do, I like buying shoes online because I'm quite busy and it save me a lot of time and I think buying shoes online is very convenient.

✓ Yes I do, I like buying shoes online because I'm quite busy and it saves me a lot of time, and I think buying shoes online is very convenient.

主语it是第三人称单数，动词save应加s变为saves。

× There are all many shoes online which make me shopping easier but sometimes I still go to store if I really need to try them on.

✓ There are many shoes online which make my shopping easier, but sometimes I still go to the store if I really need to try them on.

all many用法错误，应只用many；shopping前应加my表示所有关系；go to store前应加定冠词the。

× I usually spend about CN¥800 on shoes. I think this price is enough to get good quality shoes with a nice design. I remember buying a sport shoes last year which is quite expensive but very com comfortable to wear.

✓ I usually spend about CN¥800 on shoes. I think this price is enough to get good quality shoes with a nice design. I remember buying a pair of sports shoes last year which was quite expensive but very comfortable to wear.

sport shoes应为sports shoes，且前面应加a pair of表示一双；which指代单数应用was；comfortable拼写错误。

× I really like them.

✓ I really like them.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× I prefer fashionable shoes because I'm very interesting in fashion.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because I'm very interested in fashion.

interesting是形容词，表示“有趣的”，应使用过去分词interested表示“感兴趣的”。

× I like her follow tired and explain me on style.

✓ I like to follow her and have her explain styles to me.

原句结构混乱，表达不清，应调整为正确的表达方式。

× Comfortable shoes are nice but I enjoy shoes taker uh styles and more wear.

✓ Comfortable shoes are nice but I enjoy shoes that have styles and are more wearable.

原句中taker uh styles和more wear表达不正确，应改为that have styles和are more wearable。

× Fashionable shoes make me feel confident and delighted.

✓ Fashionable shoes make me feel confident and delighted.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。