Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习用完整且逻辑清晰的句子回答问题，避免语法错误和词汇使用错误。

例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes about four times a year, especially when my old ones are worn out. I enjoy finding stylish and comfortable shoes.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的句子，建议注意时态和句子完整性，同时使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it saves a lot of time since I am quite busy. Moreover, there are many options available online, which makes shopping easier. However, I sometimes worry about the fit if I cannot try the shoes before buying.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并提供具体且清晰的例子。

例: I usually spend about CN¥800 on shoes because I believe this amount can buy good quality and stylish shoes. For example, last year I bought a pair of sports shoes that were a bit expensive but very comfortable to wear.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并解释原因。

例: I prefer fashionable shoes because I am interested in style. However, comfortable shoes are also important. I enjoy wearing fashionable shoes daily because they make me feel confident and happy.

× I usually buy shoes about four times a year, especially when my old one.

✓ I usually buy shoes about four times a year, especially when my old ones wear out.

这里的“old one”应为复数形式“old ones”，因为指的是多双鞋中的旧鞋。此外，句子缺少谓语动词“wear out”来表达“旧鞋坏了”的意思。

× I want out all I find a study, I really like it.

✓ I want to get rid of all my old shoes. I really like buying shoes.

原句结构混乱，语义不清。应拆分为两句，表达“我想处理掉所有旧鞋”和“我真的很喜欢买鞋”。

× Yes, I have bought shoes online because it save a lot of time since I am quite busy.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online because it saves a lot of time since I am quite busy.

主语是第三人称单数“it”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“saves”。

× However, I sometimes with the story if I want to try shoes online and I think buying shoes online is very convenient.

✓ However, I sometimes worry about the fit if I want to try shoes online, but I think buying shoes online is very convenient.

原句缺少谓语动词，且表达不完整。应补充“worry about the fit”来表达“担心合适度”，并用“but”连接句子。

× For example, last year I bought a pair of stock shoes that wear a better expensive but very comfortable to wear.

✓ For example, last year I bought a pair of stock shoes that were a bit more expensive but very comfortable to wear.

“stock shoes”应为复数，“wear a better expensive”语法错误，应改为“were a bit more expensive”。

× I prefer fashionable shoes because I am very interesting in fun.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because I am very interested in fashion.

“interesting”是形容词，表示“有趣的”，应使用形容词“interested”表示“感兴趣的”，且“fun”应为“fashion”。

× I enjoy wear daily shoes more because they make me feel confident and fun.

✓ I enjoy wearing daily shoes more because they make me feel confident and happy.

动词“enjoy”后应接动名词“wearing”，且“fun”用作形容词不合适，应改为“happy”。