Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，明确表达购买鞋子的频率和原因。

例: I don't like buying shoes very much. I only buy them occasionally, usually during Chinese New Year sales.

提案: 回答较为完整，但语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I bought my latest pair of shoes online. I like them very much because they are blue, my favorite color, and very comfortable to wear.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，句子结构不清晰。建议简化表达，明确说明花费金额和原因，避免语法错误。

例: I usually spend only a few hundred yuan on shoes because I prefer to spend money on things I really enjoy, like books.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有误。建议注意冠词使用和句子结构，使表达更自然。

例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes. Although many people like fashionable luxury shoes, I believe comfort is the real luxury.

× I don't like buying shoes, actually I have only shoes in my home and I don't know some shoes brands very well, so I seldom buy shoes.

✓ I don't like buying shoes, actually I only have a few pairs of shoes at home and I don't know some shoe brands very well, so I seldom buy shoes.

这里'shoes'是复数，'brands'也是复数，但表达更自然的是用'a few pairs of shoes'表示鞋的数量，'shoes brands'应改为'shoe brands'，因为'shoe'作形容词修饰'brands'。

× I only buy shoes during Chinese. Happy new year.

✓ I only buy shoes during Chinese New Year.

句子结构不完整，'Chinese. Happy new year.'应合并为'Chinese New Year'，表示节日名称。

× Sure, actually my latest shoes was bought online and I very like it because its color is blue which is my favorite color and it is very comfortable for me to wear it.

✓ Sure, actually my latest shoes were bought online and I like them very much because their color is blue which is my favorite color and they are very comfortable for me to wear.

'shoes'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'were'，'I very like it'表达不自然，应为'I like them very much'，代词需与复数'shoes'一致，使用'them'和'they'。

× Well, maybe only several CN¥100 because in my opinion I don't care a lot of shoes I will prefer to pay money in in something I really favorite or enjoy, such as books or.

✓ Well, maybe only several hundred CN¥ because in my opinion I don't care a lot about shoes. I prefer to spend money on something I really like or enjoy, such as books.

'care a lot of shoes'应为'care a lot about shoes'，'pay money in in something'应为'spend money on something'，'favorite'用法错误，应为'like'，句子断句不清晰，需分句。

× Although many people pursue to have a fashion luxury shoes, but in my opinion the only luxury things is comfortable.

✓ Although many people pursue having fashionable luxury shoes, in my opinion the only luxury thing is comfort.

'Although'和'but'不能同时使用，二者选其一；'pursue to have'应改为'pursue having'；'a fashion luxury shoes'应为'fashionable luxury shoes'；'things'应为单数'thing'；'comfortable'是形容词，句中应使用名词'comfort'。