Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Of course, I think most males like buy sneakers. I usually buy a pair every few months.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
Yes, I have because it's clearly that's what promotion they have on their website.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
Uh, it's depends. Usually it's from $200 to $400.00, but I could increase my budget if I really like it.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
In my opinion, I will choose fashionable shoes because if I want to choose comfortable shoes, I think there's no shoes more comfortable than a slipper.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a more natural and complete response with linking words to connect ideas.
例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially sneakers. I usually purchase a new pair every few months because I like to keep up with the latest styles.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 50.0提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to directly answer the question and explain your reason clearly using proper sentence structure and linking words.
例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because the website often offers attractive promotions and discounts, which makes it convenient and affordable.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is understandable but has minor grammatical errors and could be more fluent. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to make your answer smoother.
例: It depends, but I usually spend between $200 and $400 on shoes. However, I am willing to spend more if I find a pair that I really like.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer shows your opinion but the explanation is a bit confusing and could be clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a more precise explanation.
例: I prefer fashionable shoes because they help me express my style. Although comfortable shoes are important, I think slippers are the most comfortable, so I choose fashion over comfort for regular shoes.
文法
× I think most males like buy sneakers.
✓ I think most males like buying sneakers.
The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing general preferences. Therefore, 'like buy' should be corrected to 'like buying' to be grammatically correct.
× Yes, I have because it's clearly that's what promotion they have on their website.
✓ Yes, I have because it's clearly the promotion they have on their website.
The phrase 'it's clearly that's what promotion' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'it's clearly the promotion' to properly use the definite article and avoid awkward phrasing.
× Uh, it's depends.
✓ Uh, it depends.
The phrase 'it's depends' is incorrect because 'depends' is a verb and should not be preceded by 'is'. The correct form is 'it depends' without 'is'.
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