Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi sai như 'I'm not usually buy shoes'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích thêm bằng các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often because I prefer to buy high-quality shoes that can last for three or four years.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác, ví dụ 'I have bought' thay vì 'I have been bought'. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ nối để liên kết ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về trải nghiệm mua hàng trực tuyến.

例: Yes, I bought shoes online two years ago because the price was affordable; however, the quality was not as good as I expected.

提案: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'a shoes' và sử dụng câu rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy thêm từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chi tiết hơn.

例: I usually spend about 500,000 Vietnamese Dong on shoes because I think this price is affordable for shoes that are both fashionable and of good quality.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và từ vựng chính xác, ví dụ 'comfortable shoes' thay vì 'comfortable soup'. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ có sử dụng từ nối.

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I only wear fashionable shoes on special occasions, so I like to wear comfortable ones every day.

× But actually I'm not usually buy shoes because I usually juice shoes, buy the quality of them.

✓ But actually I don't usually buy shoes because I usually choose shoes based on their quality.

The verb 'buy' should be in the base form after 'do not usually'. Also, 'juice' is incorrect and should be 'choose'. The phrase 'buy the quality of them' is incorrect; it should be 'choose shoes based on their quality'.

× So actually it's can be umm together with me for three or four years.

✓ So actually they can last with me for three or four years.

The modal verb 'can' should not be used with 'it's'. Instead, use 'they can last' to indicate duration. 'It's can be' is grammatically incorrect.

× So that's why I'm not often buy it.

✓ So that's why I don't often buy them.

After 'do not' or 'don't', the base form of the verb should be used, not 'buy'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to shoes (plural).

× Yes, I have been bought shoes online once is 2 years ago and I think it have a really affordable price.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online once about 2 years ago and I think they had a really affordable price.

The present perfect continuous 'have been bought' is incorrect here; simple past 'bought' is appropriate. 'It have' should be 'they had' to agree with plural 'shoes' and past tense.

× However the quality of them is not as my expected.

✓ However, the quality of them is not as I expected.

The phrase 'my expected' is incorrect; it should be 'I expected' to correctly express expectation.

× About 500 Vietnamese thousand Dong. I think it is the affordable price to find a shoes which have both, uh, fashionable and also have enough quality for me to use.

✓ About 500 thousand Vietnamese Dong. I think it is an affordable price to find shoes which are both fashionable and have enough quality for me to use.

'A shoes' is incorrect; 'shoes' is plural and does not need 'a'. Also, 'have' should agree with plural 'shoes'. 'The affordable price' should be 'an affordable price'.

× I prefer comfortable shoes actually because I think that I just wore fashion shoes just about a few day in my life in occasion and special festival, so that's why I prefer to wear comfortable soup for every time.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes actually because I think that I have only worn fashion shoes for a few days in my life on special occasions and festivals, so that's why I prefer to wear comfortable shoes all the time.

'Just wore' should be 'have only worn' to indicate experience up to now. 'A few day' should be 'a few days'. 'In occasion and special festival' should be 'on special occasions and festivals'. 'Comfortable soup' is a typo and should be 'comfortable shoes'. 'For every time' should be 'all the time'.