Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Yes, I love to buy shoes. Recently I purchase Jordan shoes which is nearby 2,00,000 due to my financial condition is good, so I buy Jordans and I often buy Jordans every two weeks.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
Yes I have bought shoes online as one day I was seeing a movie and advertisement pop up and the advertisement is of Jordan shoes and I preferably buy online Jordan shoes.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
I usually spend 50 to ₹1,00,000 every six month on my shoes. I have a large collection of Jordan shoes as well as Nike shoes. I love the company and the brands of Jordan, whereas I love to wear.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
I prefer both fashionable shoes as well as comfortable shoes, whereas I prefer comfortable shoes in in a place where I go without any fashion show, whereas.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 55.0提案: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Also, clarify the price and frequency more naturally.
例: Yes, I love buying shoes, especially Jordans. Recently, I purchased a pair that cost around 200,000 rupees because my financial condition is good. I usually buy Jordans every two weeks as I am a big fan of the brand.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 60.0提案: Try to make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'preferably buy online Jordan shoes'. Keep your answer natural and concise.
例: Yes, I have bought shoes online. One day, while watching a movie, an advertisement for Jordan shoes popped up, which encouraged me to purchase them online. Since then, I prefer buying Jordan shoes through online stores.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 50.0提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Be specific and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, clarify the amount you spend and explain your preference clearly.
例: I usually spend between 50,000 to 100,000 rupees every six months on shoes. I have a large collection of Jordan and Nike shoes because I really like their quality and designs.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 45.0提案: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain your preference logically and keep your answer concise.
例: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. However, when I am not attending any fashion events, I usually choose comfortable shoes to ensure I can walk easily.
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