Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda cümle yapıları biraz karışık ve eksik görünüyor. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir İngilizce için cümlelerinizi tamamlamalı ve bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi net ifade etmelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlenizi 5 cümleyi geçmeden daha etkili ve açık hale getirin.

例: Yes, I like buying new shoes because I have a special interest in them. I usually buy shoes twice a year. I prefer casual sneakers since they are comfortable. Comfort is my top priority when choosing shoes. This is why I avoid formal shoes.

提案: Cümlenizde tekrar eden ifadeler ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için tekrarları önleyin ve bağlaçları doğru kullanarak cümlenizi akıcı hale getirin. Ayrıca, cümlenizi tamamlayarak daha net ifade edin.

例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because there are more options available. Also, online stores usually offer better prices due to frequent sales. This makes shopping online more affordable than buying from physical stores.

提案: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime kullanımı sorunları var. Daha doğru ve doğal bir İngilizce için dilbilgisi kurallarına dikkat edin ve cümlenizi daha akıcı hale getirin. Ayrıca, cümlenizi bağlaçlarla destekleyin.

例: Generally, I wait for sales before buying shoes. However, sometimes I really want new shoes and buy them at full price. I usually spend a maximum of $150 per pair, which I consider my limit.

提案: Cevabınızda iyi bir yapı var ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime kullanımı sorunları mevcut. Daha doğal ve doğru bir İngilizce için zaman kiplerine ve kelime seçimlerine dikkat edin. Ayrıca, cümlenizi bağlaçlarla daha akıcı hale getirin.

例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I have to stand almost all day due to my job. As a dentist, comfort is essential for me. For example, Skechers are the most comfortable shoes I have ever worn.

× I have a special interest on shoes

✓ I have a special interest in shoes

The correct preposition to use with 'interest' is 'in', not 'on'. Therefore, 'interest on shoes' should be corrected to 'interest in shoes'. This is a common prepositional error.

× I've been buying my shoes from online websites

✓ I've been buying my shoes from online websites

The phrase 'from online websites' is acceptable, but more natural phrasing is 'on online websites'. However, since 'from online websites' is not grammatically incorrect, no correction is necessary here.

× They do often sales

✓ They often have sales

The phrase 'do often sales' is incorrect. The verb 'do' is not used with 'sales' in this way. The correct expression is 'They often have sales' or 'There are often sales'. This corrects the verb usage and word order.

× I'm spend maximum $150.00 per pair of shoes

✓ I spend a maximum of $150.00 per pair of shoes

The phrase 'I'm spend' is incorrect because 'I'm' (I am) should be followed by a verb in the -ing form, but 'spend' is in base form. The correct form is 'I spend'. Also, 'maximum' should be preceded by 'a' and followed by 'of' to form 'a maximum of'. This corrects verb tense and article usage.

× I think it's the my limit

✓ I think it's my limit

The phrase 'the my limit' is incorrect because 'the' and 'my' cannot be used together before a noun. Only one determiner should be used. Therefore, 'the' should be removed.

× I have ever wore

✓ I have ever worn

The verb 'wore' is the simple past tense, but after 'have' (present perfect), the past participle 'worn' should be used. Therefore, 'have ever wore' should be corrected to 'have ever worn'.