Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“a shoes”应为“a pair of shoes”，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。可以简洁直接地表达观点，同时补充具体细节。

例: I don't buy shoes very often because I already have enough pairs. Usually, I buy new shoes about once a year when my old ones wear out.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“board shoes in stone”应为“buy shoes in store”，且句子不完整。应使用连贯的句子表达观点，并补充原因。

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but I prefer buying them in stores because I like to try them on to make sure they fit well.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“juice”应为“shoes”，句子结构混乱。应清晰表达价格范围和购买决策的原因。

例: I usually spend between $115 and $200 on shoes. If the price is too high, I prefer not to buy them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“a comfortable shoes”应为“comfortable shoes”，且表达不够清晰。应直接表达偏好并给出理由。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I value comfort over fashion. I like shoes that fit well and are easy to wear for long periods.

× Maybe I buy a shoes once a year, I'm not sure, but it is not very often for me.

✓ Maybe I buy shoes once a year, I'm not sure, but it is not very often for me.

这里的'shoes'是复数，前面不应该加不定冠词'a'，因为'a'用于单数名词。应去掉'a'，直接用复数形式'shoes'。

× But I prefer to board shoes in stone because the shoes we need to try to fit it a lot.

✓ But I prefer to buy shoes in store because we need to try the shoes to see if they fit well.

原句中'board shoes in stone'是错误的表达，应该是'buy shoes in store'，表示在实体店买鞋。'board'和'stone'用错了词。

× In in this situ situation, when I.

✓ In this situation, when I...

句子结构不完整且重复了'in'，应简化为'In this situation, when I...'，使句子结构正确且连贯。

× Maybe from $115 to $200 after is not much expensive.

✓ Maybe from $115 to $200, which is not very expensive.

'not much expensive'用法错误，形容词'expensive'前应使用'adverb'修饰，正确用法是'not very expensive'。

× It's if the juice is too expensive I then I don't buy it.

✓ If the shoes are too expensive, then I don't buy them.

'juice'应为'shoes'，且代词'it'应改为'them'，因为'shoes'是复数。

× Actually I prefer to wear a comfortable shoes because I'm not a fans of fashionable shoes, so I send the the shoes needed to fit them and we can wear it comfortably.

✓ Actually I prefer to wear comfortable shoes because I'm not a fan of fashionable shoes, so I think the shoes need to fit well and we can wear them comfortably.

'a comfortable shoes'中'shoes'是复数，前面不应加'a'。'fans'应为单数'fan'，'send'应为'think'或其他合适动词，'it'应为'them'，因为指复数的'shoes'。