Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不完整，句子结构混乱，缺少清晰的主题句和具体细节。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

例: I don't particularly like buying shoes and I don't do it very often. For me, shoes are just everyday items, so I usually buy them only when necessary.

提案: 回答较为自然，但表达略显重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并提供更具体的理由。

例: I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer shopping offline. This way, I can try on different styles and sizes to make sure they fit well.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议直接回答问题并提供具体细节，注意语法和句子结构。

例: I usually don't spend money on shoes because my parents buy them for me. Therefore, I don't worry much about my clothing expenses.

提案: 回答表达不够自然，句子结构有误。建议使用正确的句型表达偏好，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I want to feel relaxed during my daily activities. Comfort is more important to me than style.

× I think the shoes is one of our daily clothings in our daily life.

✓ I think shoes are one of our daily clothes in our daily life.

shoes 是复数形式，谓语动词应使用复数形式 are；clothing 是不可数名词，不能用复数形式 clothings，应改为 clothes。

× all the shoes I got is from my parents.

✓ all the shoes I got are from my parents.

shoes 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 are，而不是 is。

× They in the commitment of any clothing of mine in our in my daily life.

✓ They are committed to any clothing of mine in my daily life.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且表达不清。这里应使用 be committed to 表达“他们负责我的衣物”，同时 clothing 是不可数名词，不用加复数形式。

× I would choose shoes which is suit for me in my daily life.

✓ I would choose shoes which suit me in my daily life.

shoes 是复数，关系代词后谓语动词应使用复数形式 suit，而不是 is suit。

× I prefer to buy clothing offline because you have a great option about choosing styles and the size of clothing, including shoes.

✓ I prefer to buy clothing offline because you have a great option for choosing styles and sizes of clothing, including shoes.

动词 option 后应接介词 for 而不是 about；size 应使用复数 sizes，因为指多种尺寸。