Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，同时避免重复和冗长。可以简洁明了地表达喜欢舒适鞋子且购买频率低。

例: I don't really like buying shoes often because I prefer comfortable ones. I usually wear a pair for two or three years before buying new ones.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且补充原因时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I believe it's important to try them on in the store to make sure they fit well.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不清晰。建议直接说明不太关注价格，更注重舒适度，并用恰当的词汇表达。

例: Actually, I don't remember the exact price of the shoes I buy because I care more about how comfortable they are than their cost.

提案: 回答较为完整，但句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误。建议分句表达观点，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I totally prefer comfortable shoes because nowadays, most comfortable shoes also look nice. For me, comfort is much more important than fashion.

× Not really because I prefer the comfortable shoes.

✓ Not really because I prefer comfortable shoes.

这里的“shoes”是复数，前面不需要加定冠词“the”，因为说的是一般的鞋子，而不是特指的鞋子。去掉“the”更符合英语习惯。

× If I were a comfortable shoes, I almost wear two or three years so I not often buy the shoes.

✓ If I had comfortable shoes, I would wear them for two or three years, so I don't often buy shoes.

“a comfortable shoes”中“shoes”是复数，不能用不定冠词“a”，应改为复数形式；“If I were”改为“if I had”更符合语境；“I almost wear”应为“would wear”表示假设；“I not often buy the shoes”应为“I don't often buy shoes”，去掉“the”且用否定形式。

× No, because I believe that wearing a shoes you need to go to the shops and you try it.

✓ No, because I believe that when wearing shoes, you need to go to the shops and try them on.

“a shoes”错误，shoes是复数，不能用不定冠词“a”；“try it”应改为“try them on”，因为shoes是复数，且“try on”是固定搭配。

× Actually, I can remember the literary prize for each shoes I buy because I care more about the comfortable feeling about shoes than the price.

✓ Actually, I can't remember the exact price for each pair of shoes I buy because I care more about the comfort of shoes than the price.

“each shoes”错误，shoes是复数，前面应加“each pair of shoes”；“literary prize”应为“price”；“comfortable feeling about shoes”表达不自然，改为“comfort of shoes”。

× Comfortable shoes totally, because I think nowadays most of the comfortable shoes also looks nice in the comfortable feeling for me is much more important than the fashionable looking.

✓ Comfortable shoes totally, because I think nowadays most comfortable shoes also look nice, and the comfortable feeling for me is much more important than the fashionable look.

“most of the comfortable shoes”中“of the”可省略；“shoes also looks”主谓不一致，应为“shoes also look”；“fashionable looking”应改为“fashionable look”。