Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
受験者
Yes I do actually. I was a collector umm, a few years ago I bought a lot of shoes. Every month I bought a new pair. Uh. But after that I realized this was a waste of money and time too. So now I don't buy shoes anymore.
試験官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
受験者
Yes I have. Before e-commerce was popular umm, I usually bought from stores in the malls. However, after that I all of my shoes were bought online. I bought shoes from uh, Shopee Lazada.
試験官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
受験者
It depends. I usually care more about the style and color of shoes rather than the price. However, I typically spend between 500,000 and ¥2 million, don't per pair.
試験官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
受験者
A few years ago, when I was a passionate collector, I tended to choose fashionable shoes because I enjoyed keeping up with the latest trends. However, now I prefer comfortable shoes since I spent a lot of time walking and need footwear that supports my feet well. For example, I often buy cushioned sneakers.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số từ ngữ thừa và câu trả lời hơi dài dòng. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ như "umm", "uh" và cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng trong tối đa 5 câu. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
例: Yes, I used to be a shoe collector and bought a new pair every month. However, I realized it was a waste of money and time, so now I rarely buy shoes.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ như "umm", "uh" để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ hơn về sự thay đổi trong thói quen mua sắm của mình.
例: Yes, I have. Before e-commerce became popular, I usually bought shoes at malls. However, now I buy all my shoes online from websites like Shopee and Lazada.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa chính xác, ví dụ như "don't per pair" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
例: It depends, but I usually focus more on the style and color rather than the price. Typically, I spend between 500,000 and 2 million Vietnamese dong per pair.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
スコア: 85.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm một số từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm một chút về lý do lựa chọn để tăng tính thuyết phục.
例: A few years ago, I preferred fashionable shoes because I liked following the latest trends. However, now I choose comfortable shoes since I walk a lot and need good support. For example, I often buy cushioned sneakers that protect my feet.
文法
× However, after that I all of my shoes were bought online.
✓ However, after that, all of my shoes were bought online.
The original sentence has a misplaced word 'I' which disrupts the sentence structure. Removing 'I' corrects the sentence. The sentence is in past tense, which is appropriate here.
× I bought shoes from uh, Shopee Lazada.
✓ I bought shoes from, uh, Shopee and Lazada.
The original sentence lacks a conjunction between 'Shopee' and 'Lazada'. Adding 'and' clarifies that these are two separate sources. Also, a comma after 'from' helps with the pause.
× However, I typically spend between 500,000 and ¥2 million, don't per pair.
✓ However, I typically spend between 500,000 and ¥2 million per pair.
The phrase 'don't per pair' is incorrect and unnecessary. Removing it corrects the sentence. The quantifier 'between' is correctly used here.
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