Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法错误较多，句子不够连贯，建议注意动词时态和句子结构，避免重复表达。可以用更自然的表达方式来说明你不常买鞋的原因。

例: No, I don't like buying shoes very often. I usually buy new ones only when my old shoes are worn out and I really need a replacement.

提案: 回答中动词形式错误较多，句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的动词形式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: No, I don't like buying shoes online because I prefer going to shopping malls where I can try them on before buying.

提案: 回答中表达不清楚，数字和句子结构混乱。建议明确表达价格范围，并用完整句子说明原因。

例: I usually spend around $50 on shoes because I believe that more expensive shoes tend to last longer.

提案: 句子结构和用词不准确，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的介词和形容词，清楚表达偏好和原因。

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they help me move quickly, especially when I am in a hurry to meet a deadline.

× I buying shoes when my shoes bad so I must go to buy shoes.

✓ I buy shoes when my shoes are bad, so I must go to buy shoes.

这里动词buy后面不应该直接加ing形式，应该用一般现在时buy，因为描述的是习惯动作。

× I buying shoes when my shoes bad so I must go to buy shoes.

✓ I buy shoes when my shoes are bad, so I must go to buy shoes.

形容词bad用来描述鞋子状态时，前面需要有be动词are，表示鞋子处于坏的状态。

× I buying shoes when my shoes bad so I must go to buy shoes.

✓ I buy shoes when my shoes are bad, so I have to go buy shoes.

这里表达必须做某事，应该用have to代替must更自然。

× No, I don't like buy shoes online, but I like go to shopping mall buy shoes because I can try shoes in the shopping mall.

✓ No, I don't like buying shoes online, but I like to go to the shopping mall to buy shoes because I can try shoes in the shopping mall.

动词like后面接动名词buying或不定式to go，这里应该用buying和to go。

× No, I don't like buy shoes online, but I like go to shopping mall buy shoes because I can try shoes in the shopping mall.

✓ No, I don't like buying shoes online, but I like to go to the shopping mall to buy shoes because I can try shoes in the shopping mall.

go后面需要加介词to表示去某地，shopping mall前面需要加定冠词the。

× No, I don't like buy shoes online, but I like go to shopping mall buy shoes because I can try shoes in the shopping mall.

✓ No, I don't like buying shoes online, but I like to go to the shopping mall to buy shoes because I can try shoes in the shopping mall.

shopping mall前面需要加定冠词the，表示特指购物中心。

× I usually buy shoes around 5, uh $500 I think by expensive shoes last long.

✓ I usually buy shoes around $500. I think buying expensive shoes lasts longer.

数字5和500混淆，应该明确表达价格。buy应改为buying，动名词形式。last应改为第三人称单数lasts，主语是buying expensive shoes。

× I usually buy shoes around 5, uh $500 I think by expensive shoes last long.

✓ I usually buy shoes around $500. I think buying expensive shoes lasts longer.

主语buying expensive shoes是第三人称单数，谓语动词last应加s变为lasts。

× I usually buy shoes around 5, uh $500 I think by expensive shoes last long.

✓ I usually buy shoes around $500. I think buying expensive shoes lasts longer.

buy应改为buying，动名词形式，作为think的宾语。

× I prefer to comfortable shoes because I like a comfortable and more quickly shoes in my deadline.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I like comfortable and quicker shoes when I have a deadline.

prefer后面不接to，直接接名词。more quickly是副词，修饰形容词应使用quicker。in my deadline应改为when I have a deadline。

× I prefer to comfortable shoes because I like a comfortable and more quickly shoes in my deadline.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I like comfortable and quicker shoes when I have a deadline.

more quickly是副词，修饰形容词应使用比较级形容词quicker。

× I prefer to comfortable shoes because I like a comfortable and more quickly shoes in my deadline.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I like comfortable and quicker shoes when I have a deadline.

a comfortable and more quickly shoes中shoes是复数，前面不应加不定冠词a。