Shoes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons and avoid filler words. Use simple and natural English to express your ideas.

例: Yes, I like buying shoes because they are essential for daily life. I usually buy shoes a few times a year when I need new ones.

提案: Your answer is generally good but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and smoother linking words to improve clarity.

例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. It is very convenient because I can browse many styles and compare prices without leaving my home. For example, I once purchased running shoes from an international website that offered better deals than local stores.

提案: Your answer has some unclear parts and minor errors. Be sure to pronounce and write numbers clearly and use correct prepositions. Also, try to give more specific examples.

例: I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically around 1500 to 2000 rupees per year. I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are comfortable and durable, even if they cost a bit more. For example, I often choose brands known for their long-lasting materials.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks detail. Try to give a clear opinion and explain your reasons with specific examples. Avoid hesitation and filler words.

例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they make walking easier and prevent foot pain. For example, I usually choose sneakers that support my feet well rather than fashionable but uncomfortable shoes.

× Yes, I love to buy shoes in a different acquisitions and it's for my switch is one of the essential items, you know, uh, human for humans, uh, it's uh, so it's health.

✓ Yes, I love to buy shoes in different acquisitions and it's for my switch, which is one of the essential items, you know, for humans, uh, it's, uh, so it's health.

The phrase 'a different acquisitions' is incorrect because 'acquisitions' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification. The correction removes the article 'a' before 'different acquisitions' and adjusts the sentence for clarity.

× Yes, I have product suits online several times.

✓ Yes, I have bought products online several times.

The phrase 'product suits' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'products'. Also, the verb 'have' needs a past participle to form the present perfect tense. The correction uses 'have bought products' to correctly express the action.

× I once purchased running shoes for an international website, which offer better deals than local stores.

✓ I once purchased running shoes from an international website, which offers better deals than local stores.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect when referring to buying from a website; 'from' is appropriate. Also, 'website' is singular, so the verb should be 'offers' instead of 'offer' to agree in number.

× I usually spend a moderate amount of money on Swiss, typically around 15, Rs 50 or 100 per year.

✓ I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically around Rs 50 or 100 per year.

The word 'Swiss' is incorrect here; it should be 'shoes'. Also, the placement of '15' is unclear and likely a mistake. The correction replaces 'Swiss' with 'shoes' and removes the unclear '15'.

× I often choose brands know of for their long lasting materials.

✓ I often choose brands known for their long-lasting materials.

The phrase 'brands know of' is incorrect; it should be 'brands known'. Also, 'long lasting' should be hyphenated as 'long-lasting' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because it's easy.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because they are easy to wear.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'shoes' which is plural; 'they' should be used. Also, 'easy' needs clarification; 'easy to wear' is more appropriate.

× It helps us to walk easily in different, uh, different.

✓ They help us walk easily in different situations.

The sentence is incomplete and repetitive. 'It' should be 'They' to refer to 'shoes'. The phrase 'in different, uh, different' is unclear and should be completed for clarity.